If you are able to get someone to proof read the chapters first, that way the mispellings could be corrected before bein g posted. That way, you will not need to go back and maybe correct each chapter. I liked the story, none the less.

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best chapter so far for action, character portrayal and cliff hanging

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that was awesome, sorry for waiting until the end to review but yeah didnt even see john/bryce being the same very nicely played:D cant wait to read more

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this story is still going awesome can't wait to read what happens next.

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i like the story and cant wait to read more.

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I think you are an incredibly talented writer and keep up the good work.

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I loved it !please update soon!

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What!? How could Harry just give her up like that??? I don't get it! My fic is updated, by the way...

Author's Response: You have to remember, Ron is like a brother to him and he'd never want to hurt him. Sometimes, we sacrifice everything for those that mean the most to us. (Sucks, but we do it anyway.)

Thanks again for leaving a review! - Jenn

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Hey, Jenn! Great fic, u have here! Is it HHr?

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it so far. This series is one of my favorites.

As to your question, it is and it isn't an HP/HG, but I'm not going to say anything more so I don't spoil it for you. =) - Jenn

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your story was very good

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, I'm glad that you've decided to start on this series, as it is closely related to my Discovering series. Hope you enjoy the next book just as much - Jenn

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I enjoyed the story very much

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! - Jenn

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my first review. its a bit late but i only found this FF a few days ago. any way, brilliant, gonna read ur next 1 tomorow.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you've taken the time to review and that you're enjoying the story so far! I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic as well! - Jenn

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I dearly would not want to work at Gringotts. Those car ride thingies scare me and make me feel sick just reading about them. It's like a roller coaster gone wrong or something. Urgh. Hmm. Now I feel like ice cream or something and the blasted laptop still hasn't come!! Gah. It's driving me insane. But this story is just so addicting to read. Oh why'd I have to be a bookworm?

Author's Response: Whoohoo... my addiction charms are still holding up nicely! I think the Gringotts' cart ride would be fun - I love roller coasters (providing they don't go upside down) so the wild ride would be cool. - Jenn

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Yay! He's quidditch captain! Woot. And McGonagall is friggin' awesome, I've declared to of being so. Heh. That new professor. I don't like him much. Reminds me to much of Snape and we both know how much I just love him.. Pfft.

Author's Response: Yep... one of the few things I actually got in canon before I read the 6th book. lol... You still don't like the new professor eh? *chuckles* - Jenn

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Blah. Little brain getting confused. Not smart to read this story at the same exact time as the sixth book... I keep getting details messed up. Laura is an extremely kind lady but I'd slap her for the way she speaks about Dumbledore. Really I would. And I'm close to doing it it. Just like I did with Snape a few chapters ago. =]

Author's Response: Lol... yes, she is very stubborn and holds grudges. Don't worry, she won't always be like that. And yeah - I know what you mean about book six - it was hard to write after it came out. - Jenn

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Remus + Children = ADORABLE! I love little kids a whole lot right now!! =] They are soo cute! Gah. Remus needs to get with their mom like RIGHT now so that he can be their surgate father or something. Cause he is just too cute with them. And Lizzy is just awesome. She's my new favorite character in this fic. Really she is. Heh.

Author's Response: *grin* I love writing children. I can relate to their antics so much because of my own. The only characters I love writing about with children more then Remus is Harry and Ron - they are fun... Thanks again for the review! - Jenn

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Oh. So here's the reason that the fic is under Remus/OC. Interesting. But yeah. I'm not on the new shiny laptop. Still hasn't come in. *fidgets while looking out the window* Anyway. I'm sure she'll be a bit more happier now that she has her two kids. Great chapter m'dear.

Author's Response: lol, yeah, it took me forever to get to that point in the story. And thank you again so much for all of the reviews! They really made me smile! - Jenn

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Excellent. Remus is at Hogwarts. Heh. Yeah. And that's cool that Firenze has a daughter. Hmm. I hope the whole DA things go well. It did the year before, for sure. And the new professor seems kinda iffy. Anyway. It's 1.30 at night so I'll stop here for the night. Who knows. Maybe my next review will be made to you from my new laptop! *squeee* Adieu.

Author's Response: So much going on and yeah, that new professor isn't quite 'right' is he? lol... laptops are cool - hope you enjoy yours! - Jenn

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That's cool that Luna and Neville are now in the Order ring of people. You know. I happen to like authors who do large series, like you are. They are really nice when it comes to answering reviews. Which I love. Answers to my reviews and, well, authors being nice. Anywho. Yay! They're at Hogwarts now! =]

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the new members of the order and I'm sorry it has taken me so long to answer the rest of your reviews - I've been behind and catching up is hard right now. I do hope you'll enjoy the rest of the series! - Jenn

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I x3 Remus. Really I do. I've no idea how many times I'm going to say it, but I do. I really do. At last Laura let them talk. And I hope things are going fine with Harry. *hugs Remus* Oh. And I'll be doing a lot of hugging as well. Heh.

Author's Response: Yep, I agree... Remus is awesome! - Jenn

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Aww. *hugs Harry and shoves chocolate at him* I hope he's okay. And that's horrible that Sirius had to die before he got his pardon. Aw. And Remus wasn't there! That is the most shocking part of it all. You would think he would be there... I wonder why he wasn't there.

Author's Response: *sigh* Poor Sirius, he died just before things could really look up for him. Not fair really. And Remus was supposed to be there, but he couldn't leave his duties. *shifty eyes* he was um.. preoccupied..

Harry thanks you for the chocolate and I thank you for the review! - Jenn

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Oh wow. I feel sorry for her, but then again is kinda rude, but I would fear more if she weren't fighthing against the British like she is. I mean, she American. ;] But yeah. I hope Lizzy and Lissa are okay. At least, I think Melissa is the name of the other girl. Not sure.

Author's Response: I tried not to overdo her rudeness and anger, but I know I would be even madder if I'd been in her position. I couldn't even begin to imagine having my children taken from me like that. But don't worry, it won't last forever! :)

And the girls are both fine, you'll see them soon! Thank you so much once more, for all of the wonderful reviews! - Jenn

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Remus Lupin is my hero. Kidding. Though he kinda is. I guess. I dunno. But he's awesome that is HILAROUS about Sirius going drag like that. Truly wonderful. =] I wonder how their adventure will go. And I want to know where the American family went. I loved that little Lizzy.

Author's Response: *chuckles* I had fun writing and thinking up that part! Just seemed like something Sirius would have done to get out and get away from Headquarters for a while! - Jenn

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*laughs* That was cute of Remus to try and not sneeze as to scare off Elizabeth. Gah. Just makes me love him more. Haha. =] I really wish Sirius wouldn've to die. Remus and Harry are just lost without him. Life has not been easy for either of them. I hope they're okay when they seventh book rolls around. I'll seriously cry and burn my book if Remus dies.

Author's Response: I just love Remus, his character is so fun to work with. And I know he loves children (JKR made him a teacher after all) and I tried to keep him as in canon as possible.

I agree with you about how much they have suffered through, but they do have each other - for now. - Jenn

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My gosh. Whoa. All of this is just ONE day. One day. Unimaginable. Wow. I'd like. Scream or cry or do something if all this happened to me. I wonder what happened to both pet and owner. That's completely horrifying though.

Author's Response: Can you actually believe that originally it ran on for another two or three chapters? I made lots of changes in the beginning and shortened the time down. lol. I'm long winded I guess *blushes* It is quite a bit to take in - so much happened and is happening that it's hard to think of it all fitting into a single 24 hour period.

Thank you again for the review!! -Jenn

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