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~MEGAN~Author's Response: Thanks! :D Report Review
Very descriptive. I liked this one a lot! I'm quite upset that I didn't read this one before, but as I am now, I don't see how it matters.
I like how you threw in bits of the book with this to make it something special (eg. the veil), and how you were consistent with the clues and then fully explained it at the end. It was much easier to understand the second time that I read it, as the A/N made it clearer, but as they say, it gets better as it goes, right?
Happy hols, and thank you for yet another great read!Author's Response: Thank you very much. :) I'm glad it got clearer as you went. Report Review
This was so beautiful...so descriptive! *sighs* You have a wonderful writing talent! Definately going on my favorites! (:Author's Response: Thank you so very much! :) Report Review
Remus dies? Let me recover from the shock........okay I'm good! Lolz! Very descriptive indeed! Excellent job!~Author's Response: Thanks! :) I couldn't help it, I think at the start it was actually supposed to be Remus instead of Harry. Eh, it's funny how thinks work out, hm? Report Review
Wow I have to tell you that it was interesting and dark! I loved it...I love dark views of Harry it's great I am now going to go and read your other stuff if I don't get physically dragged from the computer!!! :-)Author's Response: Thanks so much! =) I hope you don't get physically dragged...;) Report Review
wow, you set out to write a descriptive angst story and succeeded. i'm very interested in this view, keep going, you're awesom.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D Report Review
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