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Review #1, by Nick

3rd December 2004:

Well it has potential but befor you go on to write chapter 2 I would go through this chapter and take out all the notes and correct your spelling and puncutation. Answers to the notes: Corner is his last name Aperate is spelled Apparate As for the last note there's no point in putting it in there. Thats not that bad an excuss, if you think up a better one then cool but it spiols the story to have it cut off for your notes. This story is pretty good for your first fanfic and I'm sure you'll improove fast as you go your writing was already better by the end of the first chapter!Well it has potential but before you go on to write chapter 2 I would go through this chapter and take out all the notes and correct your spelling and punctuation. Answers to the notes: Corner is his last name Aperate is spelled Apparate As for the last note there's no point in putting it in there. Thats not that bad an excuse, if you think up a better one then cool but it spoils the story to have it cut off for your notes. This story is pretty good for your first fanfic and I'm sure you'll improve fast as you go your writing was already better by the end of the first chapter!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the advice. I'll make sure the next chapter is better

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