{reviewid: 1587244, reviewer: 'EllieMalfoy74'}
20th August 2007:
this is really good
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{reviewid: 965596, reviewer: 'Lolly'}
21st April 2006:
Hey please update soon, like where this is going. good work
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{reviewid: 965595, reviewer: 'Lolly'}
21st April 2006:
Hey please update soon, like where this is going. good work
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{reviewid: 728255, reviewer: 'Kimberly'}
10th October 2005:
great chapter. I cant wait till you update
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{reviewid: 599345, reviewer: 'Reiko%20Shiranagatani'}
18th July 2005:
y r u not continuing on writing this lovely story of urs????? it's really good but y stop the writing???? yet... ur not even finished with disturbed yet.... please con this story, please??? or perhaps u need a bit of help with writing and finishing this story, is it not???? keep writing... please??
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{reviewid: 505399, reviewer: 'Reiko%20Shiranagatani'}
17th May 2005:
I love this story... keep writing... it's getting to the good parts...
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{reviewid: 480371, reviewer: 'Toryismysis'}
28th April 2005:
Cool!Cant wait for more!
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{reviewid: 450832, reviewer: 'melissa'}
8th April 2005:
i thinks it a great idea to do a story on the subject. keep it coming
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{reviewid: 419353, reviewer: 'danielle'}
18th March 2005:
I love it so far!
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{reviewid: 376095, reviewer: 'fuzzygirl'}
15th February 2005:
woah cool story. PLEASE update soon, cause I realy really love it.
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{reviewid: 317559, reviewer: 'Sae%20Sae'}
2nd January 2005:
Your story's good, but you have alot of unnessisary question marks that are distrcting and take away from the story. Reread your wrok before you publish it.
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{reviewid: 309762, reviewer: 'Crystal'}
28th December 2004:
OMG I totally agree with Jenna!! And whataboutneville, with the question marks. I can't wait till the next one!!! They're soo awesome!!!
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{reviewid: 308296, reviewer: 'MoonysGirl4Life'}
26th December 2004:
kool, thanks, im dying to read the rest of this story
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{reviewid: 308048, reviewer: 'MoonysGirl4Life'}
26th December 2004:
Why havnt you updated yet...its been a really long time...you should do it before you lose your readers.
Author's Response: Sorry, I'm working on the next chapter now. I was very busy during the holidays and just havent had time to write as od late. Update should be in a day or two
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{reviewid: 301079, reviewer: 'whataboutneville'}
20th December 2004:
hullo! awesome chapter and story so far, i love it. but i've gotten a bit confused because whenever you're using quotation marks and apostrophes, it becomes a question mark. is it just my computer? oh, and when you were bolding it, it has it like[b] instead of using <>'s
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{reviewid: 286847, reviewer: 'Lieress'}
6th December 2004:
I applaud you! I just LOOOOOVE Oliver! Write more soon!
Yours Sincerely,
Lieress
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{reviewid: 283867, reviewer: 'Jenna'}
4th December 2004:
`I thought it was really good, and clever to make it so the person reading it is in the story. Im like in love with Oliver Wood, so this is like my dream come true. Well, anyway, keep on writing, cause im really curious about whats gonna happen next. Oh, and if its possible, try to add a scene with Oliver wearing no shirt (that would just make my day lol)
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{reviewid: 282843, reviewer: 'missy'}
3rd December 2004:
hey this is a really good story...keep goin..please!
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{reviewid: 282177, reviewer: 'candy'}
2nd December 2004:
holy snap! thats good! please keep updating soon babe! lol, good luck!
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{reviewid: 281855, reviewer: 'heather'}
2nd December 2004:
I like the storyline so far. Your writting is really good. Keep it up okay..
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