cute :) Report Review
huh? Report Review
cool story exept Malfoy would never give up magic for a girl. Report Review
this story was good..... add more chapters soon Report Review
Why would Harry kill his own sister, or was it Draco, oh I'm confused now. Its going good though, there was one word that lost it's e, but other than that nothing overly obvious.Author's Response: No, she was possesed, and killed draco, then harry was....
It was a dream, anything can happen, it'll make sense later I say later!!! lol Report Review
Harry didn't stop Voldemort, ooh so much my brains going to hurt!
This sentence is a little confusing Get you, you traitor, what business is it of yours who I'm kissing, the double get, I'm not sure if a word is missing, or if theres punctuation thats missing?Author's Response: It will make sense later, I promise Report Review
Interesting, a jump start story. you have a good concept going, now I'm going to try and figure out the plot, it could amost be a one shot, but its not. Author's Response: Thanks Report Review
not badAuthor's Response: yay! I got a not bad! Thanks Report Review
Chapters are really short arn't they, its not the best but its good.Author's Response: I'll try to make them longer, the rest of the chapters will be. Report Review
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