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9 Reviews Found

Review #1, by hanoverpretz01 Run away with me

6th August 2007:
cute :)

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Review #2, by ..... Run away with me

12th December 2004:
huh?

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Review #3, by I have no name Run away with me

12th December 2004:
cool story exept Malfoy would never give up magic for a girl.

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Review #4, by um The dream

11th December 2004:
this story was good..... add more chapters soon

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Review #5, by Healer_25 The dream

5th December 2004:
Why would Harry kill his own sister, or was it Draco, oh I'm confused now. Its going good though, there was one word that lost it's e, but other than that nothing overly obvious.

Author's Response: No, she was possesed, and killed draco, then harry was.... It was a dream, anything can happen, it'll make sense later I say later!!! lol

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Review #6, by Healer_25 Violet are you okay?

5th December 2004:
Harry didn't stop Voldemort, ooh so much my brains going to hurt! This sentence is a little confusing Get you, you traitor, what business is it of yours who I'm kissing, the double get, I'm not sure if a word is missing, or if theres punctuation thats missing?

Author's Response: It will make sense later, I promise

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Review #7, by Healer_25 Prolouge

5th December 2004:
Interesting, a jump start story. you have a good concept going, now I'm going to try and figure out the plot, it could amost be a one shot, but its not.

Author's Response: Thanks

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Review #8, by anonymous The dream

4th December 2004:
not bad

Author's Response: yay! I got a not bad! Thanks

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Review #9, by ..... Prolouge

4th December 2004:
Chapters are really short arn't they, its not the best but its good.

Author's Response: I'll try to make them longer, the rest of the chapters will be.

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