good plot, great story Report Review
hey good story no offense but i diidn't reallly enjoy this chapter as much as the others! but i'm sure the next one will be good! Report Review
Hey, don't feel bad about the present thing... I forgot all about Harry's birthday in my story. nice so far :-) Report Review
Very amusing story. But I really hope that that between Harry and Laura doesn't become an eternal love thing. Hope to read more soon, and I have to agree, this chapter was something to be proud of. Report Review
hey i love your story!! i dont know how long ago you updated it, but you should update soon... and let me know!! chattyash11@hotmail.com ashleigh ps thanks! Report Review
your story **ROCKS** Report Review
That was funny. Good job. And up date soon! Report Review
Um, if Laura makes Harry miserable in any way, I will send you 100 HATE reveiws, but for now I like your story. Report Review
Yeah this is a cool story, no offense but i dont like Laura that much. Update soon! Report Review
Great story! I love it! Keep up the GREAT work :P Report Review
I liked the first chapter! I feel so sorry for Harry . . . I hjate that if it happened to me . . . Report Review
Gonna update yet? Report Review
this is a really good story, plz update soon! Report Review
WOW Sorry it took so long to reveiw... stupid thing doesnt tell me when stories update grrr Nothing works right for me:P But anyways.. Great Chapter now Updat Soon Missy!!:P Report Review
this is one of the best fanfics i have ever read, could you tell me, are harry and ginny getting together in this on, even if they aren't, I'm still reading!!!!!!Author's Response: Wow, thank you! As you can tell, Ginny isn't really a big part of my story. I've never really been a big Harry and Ginny fan myself, so I don't think I'm going to have them get together. But I am completely open to all sugestions, so I think I might just try to put a little more Ginny in my story anyways. Thanks again! Report Review
u updated! yay! Ooh, this is interesting.Author's Response: Yes, after what felt like a million years. I'm quite eager to get the story rolling again so I will be posting the next chapter very soon. Report Review
this is reli gd. i love it. please rite more. me is impatient to find out wot happenin nextAuthor's Response: Thanks very much! I promise i'll update soon! I feel like I haven't updated in forever, even though it's only been a week. Report Review
omg my name is Laura lol this made me laugh so much, wow alot of rage my friends saw this and started to laugh and laugh and still are....great story i like it, keep writing Author's Response: HAha, that's really funny, one of my best friends names is actually Laura so her face kept popping up in my head, lol, I know what you mean though, thats hilarious. Thanks! Because of the blizzard, which was hellish, i've ben a bit delayed though in my writing. Report Review
good job!!! Keep writing!! I want to know what happenes!! She is a little brat, id say somthing else, but . . . Author's Response: Thanks!! Good stuff will be happening soon in this story, I have all the major stuff planned out! SHe is a bit of a b*tch, I must admit, lol. Oh and as a note to everyone, sorry but I couldn't write anything this weekend because of the massive blizzard, in which I was out in for hours trying to find cabs, very traumatic experience, but I might get some writing done this week. Report Review
YAY!!! Harry hates Laura! I know he's really mad right now but what if he can go into a depressed state, like everyone ignores him. That would fit into the angst category and still would be actionish.Author's Response: Ha, I know, I can't emhpasize that enough. I know I went a bit overboard, but I was kidn fo venting about a friend of mine who has seriosuly pissed me off, lol. I would respond to you suggestion but I am really confused what you mean. But yeah, I'm trying to move HArry a little bit out of his whole depresssion thing, nto completely but just a little so I can get soem action in there. Basically I think the whole Laura obsession is distracting him from the pain. Anyways, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
OMG!!! CUTENESS lol... Im really enjoying this story!! (Thanks for all you Help by the Way..Figured Everything out) But Awsome! Keep up the good workAuthor's Response: Thanks! Oh your welcome! I will, i'll be updatign very soon. I just have to get my other sotry sorted out! :) Report Review
horrid, author notes in the middle of a story should NOT be done just horridAuthor's Response: I know I'm sorry I'm really bad like that, always putting author notes in really inconvenient and bad places. But I don't think I do that in any othe rchapters, this is just my first one and it sucks. But thanks, I'll try and look out for that in the future. Report Review
~!~gr8 job love it~!~Author's Response: Thanks! Report Review
Good story im enjoying, keep updating :)Author's Response: Thanks I will, I'm in the middle of writing a new chapter which I love! Report Review
monosyllabic? what does that mean? Why do I have the feeling that Laura and Harry are soon gonna end up liking eachother? I don't think it was that bad of an ending.Author's Response: It means one syllable words like "hi" or "yeah". As to your question, I unfortunately can't answer that, but you'll have to wait and see. And thanks, but i'll try and make the next ending better anyways! Report Review
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