Reading Reviews for All I Ever Wanted
  
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Review #1, by Asdfghjkl All I Ever Wanted

10th April 2013:
You use simple sentences and simple words. Your sentences are all like, "She did this. She walked down the stairs. She stared at her parents' photo." You need mix up your types of sentences. The only adjectives I've really seen you use are big and green. BORING.

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Review #2, by tonksloveswerewolves Finally

17th August 2007:
aww, so sad!! the part about malfoy was a bit confusing but thats ok

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Review #3, by tonksloveswerewolves Lost

16th August 2007:
OMG the suspense is killing me!!

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Review #4, by tonksloveswerewolves All I Ever Wanted

16th August 2007:
haha, begeebers, that's a good word. I like bajeezus too.

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Review #5, by tonksloveswerewolves Hope You Like Them

16th August 2007:
aw man, poor Hermione, the world doesn't seem to like her much, eh?

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Review #6, by hanoverpretz01 The End

12th August 2007:
adorable.
a little fast-paced though.
not too draggy.

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Review #7, by losermega The End

28th June 2007:
great great story i will read the sequel

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Review #8, by eclipseblackrose1901 Help From A Familiar Face

7th June 2007:
it's really good so far. What is the name of the song by New Found Glory that you had on your last chapter?

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Review #9, by mrs_potter_13 The End

21st October 2006:
You should make a sequel!

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Review #10, by hermioneneha The End

1st August 2006:
Good job, although I wish it was longer!

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Review #11, by frostedteardrops The End

19th July 2006:
oooooooooh, awesome story!! =) great job!

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Review #12, by 51795 The End

7th July 2006:
that was 1 heck of a story! it's fantasic

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Review #13, by __ He's Coming Back

6th July 2006:
your right that was confusing!

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Review #14, by Draco and Hermione The End

24th June 2006:
EXELENT!!! I tried to get to the sequel but it says the site doesn't exist. please e-mail me to tell me what the site is. holli_snider_11@hotmail.com

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Review #15, by game13show The End

29th May 2006:
please post your sequel on this site please i want to read it.

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Review #16, by gothkimmie The End

27th March 2006:
i loved this story alot, i thought you made the story interesting and it made you want to read more. i also loved how you made this story about harry having a secret child then finding out and hermione and harry get back together and voldermolt dies so thats cool too. you are a very good story writer and you should be proud of your self for making such a great piece of work.

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Review #17, by wicked wiccan of the middwest The End

17th January 2006:
whats the name of it pleas post i want to read it

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Review #18, by west237 All I Ever Wanted

6th January 2006:
the whole story is brilliant.

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Review #19, by Julie The End

12th December 2005:
wow a happy ending it was a cute little story

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Review #20, by mareiah Help From A Familiar Face

20th November 2005:
THUMBS UP !!

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Review #21, by emma_watson The End

17th November 2005:
It doesn`t work,because you can`t do links for fanfiction.com other than fanfiction.com

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Review #22, by emma_watson The End

17th November 2005:
Whats your username on Fanfiction.com?

Author's Response: same as here. elijahsbaby1981

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Review #23, by mariah Help From A Familiar Face

17th November 2005:
was lexi raped?

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Review #24, by Secondincharge The End

11th November 2005:
o0o0o0o Love it! Great story!!! :-D

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Review #25, by Secondincharge The End

11th November 2005:
Wow! Great story! Loooove it!

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