{reviewid: 2781115, reviewer: 'Asdfghjkl'}
10th April 2013:
You use simple sentences and simple words. Your sentences are all like, "She did this. She walked down the stairs. She stared at her parents' photo." You need mix up your types of sentences. The only adjectives I've really seen you use are big and green. BORING.
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{reviewid: 1579802, reviewer: 'tonksloveswerewolves'}
17th August 2007:
aww, so sad!! the part about malfoy was a bit confusing but thats ok
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{reviewid: 1579688, reviewer: 'tonksloveswerewolves'}
16th August 2007:
OMG the suspense is killing me!!
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{reviewid: 1579545, reviewer: 'tonksloveswerewolves'}
16th August 2007:
haha, begeebers, that's a good word. I like bajeezus too.
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{reviewid: 1579479, reviewer: 'tonksloveswerewolves'}
16th August 2007:
aw man, poor Hermione, the world doesn't seem to like her much, eh?
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{reviewid: 1569797, reviewer: 'hanoverpretz01'}
12th August 2007:
adorable.
a little fast-paced though.
not too draggy.
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{reviewid: 1485754, reviewer: 'losermega'}
28th June 2007:
great great story i will read the sequel
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{reviewid: 1452194, reviewer: 'eclipseblackrose1901'}
7th June 2007:
it's really good so far. What is the name of the song by New Found Glory that you had on your last chapter?
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{reviewid: 1170349, reviewer: 'mrs_potter_13'}
21st October 2006:
You should make a sequel!
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{reviewid: 1087006, reviewer: 'hermioneneha'}
1st August 2006:
Good job, although I wish it was longer!
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{reviewid: 1068611, reviewer: 'frostedteardrops'}
19th July 2006:
oooooooooh, awesome story!! =) great job!
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{reviewid: 1053000, reviewer: '51795'}
7th July 2006:
that was 1 heck of a story! it's fantasic
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{reviewid: 1051644, reviewer: '__'}
6th July 2006:
your right that was confusing!
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{reviewid: 1035648, reviewer: 'Draco%20and%20Hermione'}
| Review #14, by Draco and Hermione | The End |
24th June 2006:
EXELENT!!! I tried to get to the sequel but it says the site doesn't exist. please e-mail me to tell me what the site is. holli_snider_11@hotmail.com
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{reviewid: 1003485, reviewer: 'game13show'}
29th May 2006:
please post your sequel on this site please i want to read it.
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{reviewid: 953342, reviewer: 'gothkimmie'}
27th March 2006:
i loved this story alot, i thought you made the story interesting and it made you want to read more.
i also loved how you made this story about harry having a secret child then finding out and hermione and harry get back together and voldermolt dies so thats cool too. you are a very good story writer and you should be proud of your self for making such a great piece of work.
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{reviewid: 862525, reviewer: 'wicked%20wiccan%20of%20the%20middwest'}
| Review #17, by wicked wiccan of the middwest | The End |
17th January 2006:
whats the name of it pleas post i want to read it
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{reviewid: 845178, reviewer: 'west237'}
6th January 2006:
the whole story is brilliant.
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{reviewid: 808246, reviewer: 'Julie'}
12th December 2005:
wow a happy ending it was a cute little story
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{reviewid: 776759, reviewer: 'mareiah'}
20th November 2005:
THUMBS UP !!
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{reviewid: 774401, reviewer: 'emma_watson'}
17th November 2005:
It doesn`t work,because you can`t do links for fanfiction.com other than fanfiction.com
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{reviewid: 774399, reviewer: 'emma_watson'}
17th November 2005:
Whats your username on Fanfiction.com?
Author's Response: same as here. elijahsbaby1981
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{reviewid: 774351, reviewer: 'mariah'}
17th November 2005:
was lexi raped?
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{reviewid: 766165, reviewer: 'Secondincharge'}
11th November 2005:
o0o0o0o Love it! Great story!!! :-D
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{reviewid: 765985, reviewer: 'Secondincharge'}
11th November 2005:
Wow! Great story! Loooove it!
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