Wow.. that was...wow, lol, that was very... I don't know, but it was good, disturbing but good, people tell me I have an odd sense of humor, but laughed at one part during the whole story,-- “This is starting to remind me of Final Destination,” the teen said with a shiver. The dark haired man shot him a perplexed look but then shrugged it off.-- for me that’s what made the story great, dark and disturbing but yet oddly funny in its own way... I’m weird I know lol ~later~

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing. I thought that part was funny too. I kind of put it in there to be funny. add some humor to try and lighten the situation.

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it is really really good, the only thing i would say is that its just...oh idont kno how to say it. but oh well. it was good

Author's Response: glad u liked it Eva. What was the only thing? I know it was rather grusome but that was the point.

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Awesome. It kind of reminds me of those old slash and kill horror movies like Friday the 13th and Predator. Even more awesome is how well this story was written.

Author's Response: it was meant to be a horror story. I believe someone on Mugglenet stated "her prejudice is atrocious".

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Really descriptive... I love it

Author's Response: I had fun writing that. You probably figured out who all the people were..

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Woah! That was intense! I really liked that, even though it was kinda gorey. I think i Could figure out who everyone was. In order of deaths: McGonagall, Dumbledore, hermione, mr weasly, mrs weasly, ron and ginny, lupin(?), harry snape? is that how it went? I think so... Well, good job! Gabbit

Author's Response: You were pretty close. It went: McGonagall, Lupin, Hermione, Mr and Mrs. Weasley, Ron and Ginny, Dumbledore, Harry and Snape. But you did wonderfully. You got all the right characters and 80% of them in the correct order of death. I'm very proud!

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Now -that- was fascinating.I loved it, it was captivating in a morbid kinda way...

Author's Response: I didn't know if people would like it. I'm glad you did. I wrote it without names because I wanted to see how well people knew the characters.

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