{reviewid: 446064, reviewer: 'AllisonJS'}
4th April 2005:
When are u gonna update???!!!!!
Author's Response: It's finished....
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{reviewid: 437696, reviewer: 'xoxxkatexoxx%28not%20logged%20in%29'}
30th March 2005:
love the beginning!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 426755, reviewer: 'AllisonJS'}
23rd March 2005:
Nice one!! Keep on writing!!
Author's Response: thanks.
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{reviewid: 421800, reviewer: 'ravenlupin'}
20th March 2005:
this is for the whole story not just the first chappie... this is a great story i love it!!!!
Author's Response: thanks, its almost finished, just a few more chapters.
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{reviewid: 419337, reviewer: 'SweetlikeCandy31'}
18th March 2005:
I loved it. Very interesting. I liked the new house thing. It was very cool.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, your one of the few to like the new house.
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{reviewid: 415461, reviewer: 'FaymosAmos'}
16th March 2005:
What a fantastic chapter! I agree with Lucid, and think you should write some original fiction.. you seem to have a knack for original creativity. Great story!
Author's Response: heh, yeah I like originality, but I like fanfics too.
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{reviewid: 415458, reviewer: 'FaymosAmos'}
16th March 2005:
very unique story... on to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 415454, reviewer: 'FaymosAmos'}
16th March 2005:
Your story gets more intersting with every chapter I read. Great job!
Author's Response: thanks!
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{reviewid: 415453, reviewer: 'FaymosAmos'}
16th March 2005:
Well, that took me by surprise!
Author's Response: :D I said there was romance, but well not everything happens as it should.
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{reviewid: 415451, reviewer: 'FaymosAmos'}
16th March 2005:
I don't like that wand! lol... seriously, though, I've got goosebumps now.
Author's Response: Yeah the wands pretty evil.
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{reviewid: 415448, reviewer: 'FaymosAmos'}
16th March 2005:
This chapter moved a little to quickly for me, but I liked it. The cursed wand really caught my attention.
Author's Response: Sometimes I felt rushed writing it, like there was too much to say and not enough time.
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{reviewid: 415445, reviewer: 'FaymosAmos'}
16th March 2005:
Hee hee... I keep seeing Harry accidently squashing Ron and Draco... oops! :-P
Author's Response: I didn't even think of that, maybe Ron could have nightmares....*thinking evil thoughts*
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{reviewid: 415442, reviewer: 'FaymosAmos'}
16th March 2005:
Ron's protectiveness was well portrayed (not to mention cute!). Maybe I missed it, but I'm confused as to how exactly Hermione is changing?
Author's Response: It becomes more apparent by the end of the fic.
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{reviewid: 415438, reviewer: 'FaymosAmos'}
16th March 2005:
I liked the outraged Hermione with her Hogwarts: A History! The dialogue seems a little stilted, though. Think of it as if you were the one talking, and how you would converse with others.
Author's Response: This was the second chapter I ever wrote, maybe I should go back and look at it again...
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{reviewid: 415435, reviewer: 'FaymosAmos'}
16th March 2005:
Very intriguing. A little more background info would have been nice. Lovely beginning.
Author's Response: what type in Leo's case...theres not a whole lot to say, she was mean't to be a bit unknown.
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{reviewid: 414469, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
15th March 2005:
I think there are some runons, but other than that, this story is good!
Author's Response: hehe, I have trouble with runon sentances, the worst part is I never see them either...sigh.
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{reviewid: 413966, reviewer: 'AllisonJS'}
14th March 2005:
Great chapter!! twas awesome
thats all i have to say
Author's Response: Thank you so much.
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{reviewid: 408386, reviewer: 'Jess'}
11th March 2005:
I love it! Get them out quicker if you can!
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 408058, reviewer: 'AllisonJS'}
10th March 2005:
Awesome!!! please keep writing!
Author's Response: thanks. :)
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{reviewid: 404637, reviewer: 'Lucid'}
8th March 2005:
I get the feeling that you would be much happier and better off writting original fiction. You have wonderful idea's and concepts that could be fully utilized in a original fiction. I have really enjoyed reading this.
Author's Response: I do enjoy writing original fiction, but I don't have the time to completely set up a world, mostly because I'm trapped at school. So its fanfic until I have more time.
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{reviewid: 404626, reviewer: 'Lucid'}
8th March 2005:
This certainly throws up some interesting questions about Draco. I admit that you have peaked my interest and I am now really wondering where this is going. The description here is much much better than before.
Author's Response: This was one of the first stories I ever wrote and then I left it for a while, but in that time I was writing other stories, so I went back and changed the entire thing to my writing style. Added about 4000 words in that editing frenzy.
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{reviewid: 404602, reviewer: 'Lucid'}
8th March 2005:
Well that was a surprise ending, I wasnt expecting that. That chapter is probably the best written yet :) well done.
Author's Response: thanks! I'm happy you liked it.
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{reviewid: 404592, reviewer: 'Lucid'}
8th March 2005:
Creepy wand...really creepy...but interesting at the same time which has really made me want to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah it is pretty creepy though I'll explain it later on... Maybe.
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{reviewid: 404588, reviewer: 'Lucid'}
8th March 2005:
I would have thought that Draco would have been a little more unco-operative, I am finding it difficult to believe that he would be so nice with no nasty agenda hidden underneath the surface. *goes to read next part*
Author's Response: Well it mostly because his families been using mood altering drugs, so its my explanation of why he was so nasty.
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{reviewid: 404509, reviewer: 'Lucid'}
8th March 2005:
The wand is interesting, I am wondering exactly how that fits in with everything else. I am still a little uncomfortable with the wandless magic but I shall stay with it and see what you have in mind.
Author's Response: It's an important part, the wandless magic is much less then it was but its still semi important, I mean how do you exist if there are no trees?
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