{reviewid: 2628922, reviewer: 'Annie'}
14th December 2011:
It's a good story, but the chapter's were short and seemed to be under developed. It would have been better if you had put more time into Lily and James love story.
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{reviewid: 2512817, reviewer: 'Lavander'}
24th April 2011:
it was good and chapters are good too.but the chapters are too short! Infestesia writes it longer, so i like her most(no offence)
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{reviewid: 2343088, reviewer: 'supportingseverus'}
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5th May 2010:
aside from the extreme violence from james...which seemed way out of character...it was good
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{reviewid: 2343086, reviewer: 'supportingseverus'}
5th May 2010:
james is so abusive here its horrible.
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{reviewid: 1869887, reviewer: 'Tear%20filled%20eyes'}
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20th March 2008:
You made only one mistake: YOU DIDN'T MAKE ANY! It was the best I have ever read, and that is saying something!
10/10
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{reviewid: 1869883, reviewer: 'Tear%20filled%20eyes'}
20th March 2008:
Wicked! It is so dramatic.
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{reviewid: 1869882, reviewer: 'Tear%20filled%20eyes'}
20th March 2008:
WOW! It is sooo cool and brilliant! How do you get ideas like that. I wanna write a fan fic, but i just don' have the ideas.
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{reviewid: 1486226, reviewer: 'HelloKitty'}
28th June 2007:
what the heck!! are you trying to kill them before Harry Potter!! i wonder what happens next.
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{reviewid: 1486196, reviewer: 'HelloKitty'}
28th June 2007:
AAW!!! that is so sweet! lily is sweet and caring now and i really like that now!
P.S. if there was a rating higher than 10 i would put it!
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{reviewid: 1486193, reviewer: 'HelloKitty'}
28th June 2007:
man! lily is being really harsh! i don't like that about lily! she kind of asks like she is all that! i love your story and i can't wait to read the rest!
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{reviewid: 1422814, reviewer: 'EvansPotter'}
18th May 2007:
it was fair.
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{reviewid: 1422791, reviewer: 'EvansPotter'}
18th May 2007:
WHAT THE HELL IS THIS CRAP! HOLY CRAP James would never hurt Lily.NEVER!
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{reviewid: 877137, reviewer: 'angel007'}
27th January 2006:
ummm, I haven't read the story but I just wanted to tell you that James was the popular guy...Lily wasn't popular...*lol* I suppose it doesn't matter *lol*
angel
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{reviewid: 754215, reviewer: 'chelsea'}
31st October 2005:
the ending was sooooooooooooo corny
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{reviewid: 620593, reviewer: 'Ginnysister'}
31st July 2005:
it is a bit strange. although i liked the twists! and i think you should have added a line like,and "bre" was forvever punished or soemthing. but i LOVED it
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{reviewid: 489316, reviewer: 'Leah%20Weasly'}
5th May 2005:
schweet..... That was really nice ending the story!
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{reviewid: 489315, reviewer: 'Leah%20Weasly'}
5th May 2005:
hmmmm
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{reviewid: 489314, reviewer: 'Leah%20Weasly'}
5th May 2005:
whats up with Bre?
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{reviewid: 489311, reviewer: 'Leah%20Weasly'}
5th May 2005:
omg that was horrible.... not the writing but the scene///!
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{reviewid: 489310, reviewer: 'Leah%20Weasly'}
5th May 2005:
I feel so sad for James!
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{reviewid: 489306, reviewer: 'Leah%20Weasly'}
5th May 2005:
I loved this chapter! ou portray Remus and Sirius so well!
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{reviewid: 489304, reviewer: 'Leah%20Weasly'}
5th May 2005:
ummm. that was.....GOOD!!!
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{reviewid: 489302, reviewer: 'Leah%20Weasly'}
5th May 2005:
ooooo////.....~~~
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{reviewid: 489301, reviewer: 'Leah%20Weasly'}
5th May 2005:
oh, this is sweet..
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{reviewid: 347391, reviewer: 'lizy'}
23rd January 2005:
ummm.....no!!! lilyz shown too...too....i dunno buh wateva da rite word iz....itz nuh exactly nice
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