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Review #1, by Angela The Beginning

5th February 2005:
OH MY GOSH, LIKE I TOTALLY LOVE YOUR AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is so detailed and imaginative, I couldn't take my eyes away from it. You did a totally great and wonderful job. I think you would like this story by SydandLiz called "Harry Potter and the Muggle-Born Princess". It sort of reminded me of yours, and it's just so interesting. Leave a review on there and say what you think. I'll check the reviews to see if you enjoyed it, but I know you will. Love ya, Angela

Author's Response: I am so so glad you liked it....I'm the kinda author that lives on reviews and I've been disheartened by the lack of enthusaism shown. Thanks for your review. I would be so grateful if you could recommend my stories too other ppl so I can get some more perspective. I'm in the middle of chapter 3,4 and 5 the timelines need adjusting etc but still some dramatic things happen so stay turned. x

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Review #2, by Cameron_Cox The Beginning

20th January 2005:
I'm definitely intrigued...both by Raven and by Harry and Draco's little interaction there. :D This is a great start! I'm gonna go read chapter 2 now since it's up already. I'll see you back here on the review board in a few minutes! :D

Author's Response: see below lol

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Review #3, by ServantIndo The Beginning

9th December 2004:
Good start. I hope you work on it more. I like it!!

Author's Response: glad u enjoyed it.

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Review #4, by AnneLeigh86 The Beginning

25th November 2004:
Hey! I am REALLY liking this so far, you've set up the plot quite nicely, and I like the subtle, yet obvious connection between Harry and Draco, it makes me want to read more! Although, one thing I would say is that there were a fair few grammer/spelling errors. This happened to me my first chapter too, until I got a spell check program, but if you want I could read through it and correct the things i noticed, or I could just tell you about them. Either way, feel free to email me anytime, Once again, AWESOME job so far, I can't wait to read more, so update soon!

Author's Response: hey, im soo glad liked it. other people have read it but havent reviewed it so i was starting to get a bit worried. Sorry about the spelling/grammer, it was never my strong point. I did check it over but if there's any more let me know and next chaper will be up soon!

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