Excellent beginning. It's very realistic, and shows a different side to Severus' family. Poor Leeara. Very nice twist, combining to different wars. But they were the same, still. Discrimination against Jews, discrimination against Muggleborns. Fearsome Nazis, fearsome Death Eaters. Great job.Author's Response: thnx. i want to finish this but I think I deleted it.. Report Review
Wow that was really good. Welcome tomy favorites. Try to update soon!Author's Response: If I finish what i'm working on now..I'll try..I am soo glad you took the time to read all of my fics!! You rock! Report Review
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