this is really cute! Report Review
Oh, that was great! I hope that isn't the end -- I would love to see more! I'm a huge fan of second-person stories! I've written three myself, so I know that they're just as much fun to write as they are to read. This is probably one of the best written second-person stories I've seen. More often than not, when people write second-person stories, they make the "you" character a huge Mary-Sue, and that drives me crazy! Rest assured, your "you" character is not a Mary-Sue, and I like that. Also, you aren't careless about your writing -- another very good thing. Do keep up the great work! If there's more, I can't wait to see it soon! Report Review
MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!! Report Review
Omg! I like this story! Well, maybe its cuz i like Ron... well, neways it was really good and i was wondering if u could... maybe... review my stories Report Review
Hiya wiked chapter but i\'m just a bit puzzled who is ron writing the essay with. but good anyway please read and review mine the unexpected letter. Cya Eowyn Report Review
Cool! It\'s a really cool idea to make a reader the main character! please keep writing, it\'s a sweet story! :) -Z>Peppercat Report Review
Is there going to be more? I do hope so... Report Review
Wow this is an excellent story. The POV was done very well. Please go on! Report Review
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