i always knew slytherin was evil but i never knew he would murder anyone please update im going crazy

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Very interesting. Her punishment seems harsh, but I guess that was how things were in those days. As for her mother getting murdered-that is TRAGIC! My God, I hate Salazar. And as for the music box-wow. Interesting. Very interesting.

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The chapter started out on a classic note, and then progessed to something very interesting and original. The feistiness of Celestina amuses me, and you left the chapter as a cliffhanger. Great job.

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Wow, amazing ending! It's just as good as the first part, if not better. Your writing style is excellent and the plot is creative and exciting. Celestina is a very strong character, complimented by the four founders and Orion. Bravo on a great story!

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Great start to your story! It's interesting how you picked up on the music box and Celestina (she has been mentioned in the books, too, I believe) and created a story out of them. All in all, this is very well-written and enjoyable to read. I'll be sure to follow up on this one in the future!

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Brilliant, absolutely brilliant! Postiviely Fantastic!!! I can't believe it!!! When I had read the OotP for the second time I remebered the music box, and I had the exact vision of what it looked like as you did. Creepy eh? Anways you picking to write a story about a music box (which all we know is insignificant so far in JKR's books) is aboslutely original!! I love it, it shows that you are not afraid to write what you think and what your imagination conjures up. I must admit this was one of my favorite stories and you lightly add darkness into it which makes it more curious. I have not seen many stories that include the four founders of Hogwarts, but that doesn't mean there aren't any, but I love yours!! Please inform me of the updating of your story! Keep up the good work!!

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This is really interesting...what has happened 2 her?? i'm sooo confused!!! lol!!! It is a really good story!!!! CONTINUE AND UDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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WOW!! this is really goood! you should write more chapters to it, I would like to find out what happend to her!

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Hey, that was really good!!!!!!!!!! They definately did some changes 2 the site didn't they? cool. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (on everything) ta-ta!!!!! 10+++++

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