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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Lovesharrygirl The Beginning

20th April 2005:
i think you should add more to this story because it is very good and i want to know what happens to the main character

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Review #2, by Healer_25 The Beginning

15th February 2005:
If you added a bit more of descriptive text it would make the story more interesting, show their inner feelings and frustrations, their hand gestures, the things they see, etc. Otherwise its coming along fine.

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