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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ILuvSwimming The Forbidden love

8th July 2005:
write another chapter and quick

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Review #2, by lazyperson The Forbidden love

9th June 2005:
its good please continue =)

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Review #3, by Healer_25 The Forbidden love

14th February 2005:
It would be more interesting if you added descriptive text like "Oh I'm so happy to see you" Hermione flung herself at Harry and Ron embracing them in a hug so tight they could barely breath. Something like that, its off to an interesting start.

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Review #4, by Harry_potters_gal The Forbidden love

7th November 2004:
It's ok...add the next chapter and it may get better...not a lot happened in this one!

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