I know this story has been adandoned, but i think it is such a waste. It was really good and you had me on tenterhooks waiting for the next chapter...then i realised there wasn't going to be one. :( Keep writing. Report Review
but wait , first harry still has his old nimbus and now he's ridding a firebolt, just a little thing, but that is a little confusinf. but other wise pretty good so far Report Review
Hey! This is a reeeeaaaally good series! I think you get everyone's character brilliantly. I've even added you to my favourites! Can't wait 'till the next chapter is out! Report Review
gosh i feel soo bad abt wad i said =(...i still love the story so far though and cant wait for the next one...im sososososo ooo sry!!!!!!i feel mean..sry Report Review
its realli nice but maybe you could try and not rush the story too much..im very sry if this offends you or anything but try elaborating on things..unless you haf smth in mind then nevermind..but personally i think you should drag the school year a bit...so sry again if this ofends you..i still think you can write well though =).... Report Review
Great story! I love it thus far and can't wait to read the rest! Keep up the wonderful work! Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
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