8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by samkirk10 Harry\'s assignment

3rd August 2010:
please wright more to the story

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Review #2, by Lady Lemonade of the Lemurs Harry\'s assignment

29th December 2006:
I'm sorry, but this is the worst fan fiction I have ever read in my life. I hope you're having fun, though.

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Review #3, by Deadly_sins_Snape Harry Potter runs away from Number 4 Privet Drive

22nd April 2004:
yeesh ive only read the first chapter...but i think you need a little help on sentence structure....ever used 'compound' sentences? there's a few gramma problems, but i like this storyline alot....maybe you could use a beta?

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Review #4, by Deadly_sins_Snape Harry Potter runs away from Number 4 Privet Drive

22nd April 2004:
yeesh ive only read the first chapter...but i think you need a little help on sentence structure....ever used 'compound' sentences? there's a few gramma problems, but i like this storyline alot....maybe you could use a beta?

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Review #5, by wolf Harry Potter runs away from Number 4 Privet Drive

21st May 2003:
WHOA! Wild ff on the loose!

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Review #6, by purple Harry Potter runs away from Number 4 Privet Drive

17th February 2003:
I know it says that the name is purple but the aurthor of the story is not writing this, it is her sister writting it. I think this story is good grat osim becose it sonds grat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review #7, by Anon Harry Potter runs away from Number 4 Privet Drive

16th February 2003:
MUNCHKIN LAND? Ok this person is weird...........

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Review #8, by Someone Harry Potter runs away from Number 4 Privet Drive

15th February 2003:
Very good. Please more soon.

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