An amazing chapter, whens the next one coming out.Author's Response: sorry should bring one out somtime this or next week. i got grounded lol, so my plans got largely delayed. Report Review
this is pretty good. good descriptions of harry's feelings and stuff. um there are a couple grammer things but hey, everyone has those. just make sure to capitalize Voldemort. im sure it was just a type-o. this is a good story and it shows promise, so keep it up k?Author's Response: i know ill fix grammer errors soon. i just got grounded so it will be a while lol. i hope i can get another chapterup by the 5th or so. Report Review
Nicely written beginning, There are some spelling and grammar errors though, and some Americanisms. Other than that I like your style. It flows quite well. Well done! :DAuthor's Response: I know it, I think i "might" delay chapter 8 becuase im currently reading some stuff on how to sound more british and there slang. im also going to re-proof read everything tongiht now that the chapters arent fresh in my head from wrighting last night. Report Review
I'm addicted! hurry up and post the next chapter! Report Review
Keep going! Keep rolling! Report Review
Only this much reviews? Are you freakin serious! These people are crazy! How can they not leave you a review? Report Review
Neato dude! Way wretcho! What can I say but:
I'm into the hippy trend. Report Review
You are brilliant, and yeah, your idea for action would be great! Keep them chapters coming! Report Review
Hey wow!!!!!! That was great!!!!! it really has to go into my faves!!! but it can't....at least not until I log in.....LOL it rocked!Author's Response: Thank so much, seings how my only reviews are positive so far ill make a point to get the next chapter up by the 27th!(2 days). IMPORTANT CHAPTER!!!!
Though i have one more question i want to direct towards everyone so listen up! How do you like each chapter having some kind of big action? Like every chapter so far has had atleast one action
chapter 1: harry goes back to wizarding world
chapter 2: Accepted into order
chapter 3: New broom and and rescues Luna
chapter 4: War in Diagon alley
chapter 5: Answer questions about powers
Plus i got all the side stuff like "hearing voices" and such.
What im trying to do is make sure every chapter is NOT some crappy "harry walks down to hagrid's hut" for the day sort deal. But since this is my first book I would like to know from everyone else if that is ok for me to do or should i put in boring chapters? Report Review
Wow...this is great. Do keep it up! I'm surprise that no no else has left you a review...which is like...totally weird because this is a great story. I'm telling you, keep posting!Author's Response: Thankyou so much! i've been dying for a review positive or negative.
I just wanna make a quick comment. I noticed after re-reading chapter 1-4 that i have some spelling mistakes and sentences that dont flow well. I think this happened becuase when i had just freshly wrote it i knew what i ment to say but it didnt come out that way. now a week or so later since its not fresh in my mind i found the mistakes so i promise ill have them fixed when i post chapter 8 this week! Report Review
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