Very nice imagination describing the room's decor. And very nice job keeping the reader in suspense. Report Review
I loved the trilogy! Especially the ending! You are an awesome writer and should write a book for the whole world to see! 12121212/12121212 Report Review
Can't believe I just found this trilogy but it was very well written. i can't believe you were only 13 when you first wrote More Pain Than I Can Pain. Hope you keep writing. Report Review
poor poor poor harry!!! Report Review
I just read the entire trilogy! It was amazing! I can't believe you were only 13 when you started writing this. You are going to be a truly amazing author someday! ^_^ Report Review
I LOVE THIS TRILOGY! I know I haven't reviewed that much, but I really do like it. It would be interesting to see what happens after that.
Can I make a sequel for it if you're not going to? Report Review
I abosolutly love it!!! Esspecially the way it ended, but in my opinion you spent to long on the toasts. Report Review
really good! :) took me a while to read but i luved it! Report Review
Awesome story...especially the end. Maybe you should do another story following this one, about the aftermath? It was awesome, how you got Harry to fit in perfectly with how Rowling portrays him, while still making him yours. You are probably one of the better authors on this site, because you can change things while keeping it the same-if that makes any sense whatsoever. Report Review
a great trilogy Report Review
Great story, I was waiting for a long time to finish reading it.
thank you for a great read but i really hoped you would write about harry's sixth year from this story.
I think it would be really good =)
the greatest story ever!
i was waiting half a yr for this ending!!!
i love it! will u again rite a sequel??
please do!!!! Report Review
HAHAHA! THAT IS HILARYIUS! It was definetly worth waiting a year! Report Review
Finally!! Yeahm this was an awesome story, and I love how you ended it. I am glad, though that I just found you a about a week and a half ago, but I love your stories enough that i added you to my favorite authors list. yeah, hope you hurry up on 'A Little Thing Called Love' yeah. You are great.you, this chaprter, this stroy, and this trilogy: 1,000,000/10 lol yeah. (Did it reallt take you two years to write this? lol) please, we both (Black Blood Dragon and I-she still Hasn't gotten her own account) hope you keep writing, so please keep writing. Report Review
Uh! you have got to e-mail me when ever you update! I am so glad Sky Goddess showed it to me. My e-mail address: firstname.lastname@example.org
and just to piss her off, here's Sky Goddess's e-mail: email@example.com
A?Shkd rfe as/erl;j Sorry, SG here, BBD is evil!!!!!
BBD:my friends is being an idiot, but plz, e-mail us when you update, and update soon!!! Oh, and love the constant SI, and it actualy helpd me cuz i cut, so yeah, oh and u:
>>...it shouldn't take long...
100%Author's Response: You have just been e-mailed. ^_^ Report Review
You still haven't made an epilougue. But I love your story. Anyway, you last updated in December, and it is now 7 months later, July. you're not going ot write an epilougue, are you? anyway, keep writing, though i doubt it.
1000/10Author's Response: Have some faith in me, chicky. Especially since I just uploaded the new chapter. :D Report Review
good story!Author's Response: Thanks very much! ^_^ Report Review
Come on what's going to happen next? Im dying to know. I've waited months and still it's not finished. Will you please hurry up. It's Brilliant by the way.Author's Response: Lucky for you, as soon as HPFF decides to let in more submissions, it will be up. I know it's asking a lot since I've already made you - and everyone else - wait this long, but if you could, just wait a little bit longer. ^_^ Thanks so much for the review and your committment to this story! Report Review
I absoletly LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Are you writing the next chapters? please please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: The last chapter should be out as soon as HPFF allows me to submit it. ^_^ Thanks for the review! Report Review
ummm....bellatrix knew that harry could do wandless magic from diagon alley, so why would she say "can it be true, can potter really do wandless magic" ?
good plot, but you need to clear up things and polish it, refine it.Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. Glad to see that some people are still paying attention. ^_^ I am going to go back and "polish" the whole trilogy as soon as HPFF allows me to submit my epilogue, so I will keep that in mind. Thanks again for pointing that out! Report Review
wow!!! when are u posting the new chapters???!!!?!??
i have got to read this whole story! Do u know what a GREAT and AWESOME writer you are?
Mannnn.... YOU are goooddd
PLEASE POST THE OTHER CHAPTERS!!!!
or email me when you r going to..
my email is firstname.lastname@example.org
thankzAuthor's Response: Again, thanks so much for all of the compliments. As soon as HPFF lets me submit my chapter, I will go ahead and e-mail you. ^_^ Report Review
You updated and I didn't know! *huggles this story* :D Well, anyway, good for Harry for telling Voldemort that it isn't his fault, that it's Voldemort. It sounds like he really believes that, so I hope he does. I love Harry standing up to Voldemort like that and giving him a piece of his mind. Maniacally laughing Harry is sort of scary. Aw, why they stop him, it was sort of entertaining, too :P Aw, poor Harry; I feel so bad for him when he goes crazy and everyone looks at him like that. Oh, please, please update! But that was brilliant! And I'm glad to know Remus was okay ;)Author's Response: *huggles SL* WEEEE! I did update! And as soon as HPFF starts liking me again and letting me upload a new chapter, I'll update the epilogue, too! :D I like StandingUpForHimself!Harry, too, and I too quite liked the scene where he was going all slasher-film-but-with-Crucio-instead on Bella too. Too bad Dumbledore had to step in and be all Canon... :p *pokes Dumbledore* And yeah, that is a major poor Harry...if it was Dan, I might have just had to step in a give him a hug to make him feel better...although, with the state that he's in, more than a hug probably would have been needed. *snickers* And what are you talking about - you know I'd never do anything to your Remus! I'd never hear the end of it if I did! ...not that's the only thing holding me back, of course. Nope, not at all. ;) Report Review
Fantastic. That was one of the best chapters I have ever read. You have to finish it though. Report Review
Oooh... Not such a happy ending, is it? YAY! I hate happy endings.
But seriously. You took over seven months, I think. I lost track.
But besides that, I love you. Uhmm... I mean... your stories. >.<Author's Response: Yeah, not a very happy ending...or is it? Hmmm...you'll just have to wait and see. ^_^ And I apologize for the wait on the last chapter, and now on the epilogue, but as soon as HPFF starts accepting chapters again, I will send it in! And thanks - the love is returned. Report Review
hey sailor c,
u must must write the epilogue for this. this is a great story and i want to adn need to know teh ending of it!!! please plaese please rite it. this whole series is great. i swear u can rite books and be famous all over the world. u should start writing books. ur a great author and u know, i wouldn't be surprised if u bcome the best writer. good job! i enjoyed reading all these series. made me cry all of them...ur good! cant wait till the next one... Author's Response: Once again, thank you so, so much for all of the compliments! *hugs* They really mean so much, especially the ones about me being an actual author. These comments really make my day. Know that, as soon as HPFF starts accepting chapters again, that mine will be up. I'm pushing to get it out as soon as I possibly can. Please wait just a bit longer! Report Review
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