hmm .. pretty good so far, you've captured my attention, so please update soon. Report Review
Now I'm real curious what going to happen in your next chapter! :) I think it's great how you describe the story from Cara's point of view. A few more lines/spaces between the story would make the overview of the story better. I liked it you made me want to read more! looking forward to the next chapter! Neelahn Report Review
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