Lol I laughed '“Well, I can jump really high…” said Quirrell in a small voice." Good POV of Quirrell! Report Review
For your first fic that was REALLY good. I mean, it was good for a fic in general. So often you run into ones that have no new paragraphs for dialouge, incorrect punctuation, and words like "where, wear, and were" mixed up. Good job and keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Report Review
that was pretty good...i must say a "nice job" to you ~Regan~ Report Review
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