{reviewid: 1013474, reviewer: 'klulezzklutz'}
6th June 2006:
oh who cares about what JKR wrote? contiue this story!
Author's Response: At the moment I'm just not sure where to go with it. :) We'll see; I've been writing a lot lately and if I can come up with something I'll be updating.
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{reviewid: 968332, reviewer: 'tlp'}
24th April 2006:
love it so far
Author's Response: Thanks; I'm glad you're enjoying it!
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{reviewid: 959256, reviewer: 'k2_vet'}
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14th April 2006:
Hiya this is great!!! looking forward to the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not sure when I'll be posting it; I'm making a few editing changes first.
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{reviewid: 955879, reviewer: 'stephanie_potter'}
10th April 2006:
I hope you update this soon, because i am really enjoying reading this story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try, although I'm going to have to go back through and review what I've written. I've been in such a state of Writer's Block lately that I haven't done much with it.
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{reviewid: 698344, reviewer: 'Spade'}
17th September 2005:
Its spectacular cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much. I've started on the next chapter a bit, so it should be up in a few weeks.
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{reviewid: 665953, reviewer: 'super%20duper%20sausage'}
25th August 2005:
hi iv just read your fic n its really good i know its probably been there a while but it really got me hooked keep writtin!!!!
sausage
x
Author's Response: I'm almost done with the next chapter. It should be posted sometime soon.
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{reviewid: 610730, reviewer: 'mayo'}
26th July 2005:
wow.. i loved your pieces!! very awesome!!! thanks for sharing it!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. ^_^
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{reviewid: 610725, reviewer: 'mayo'}
26th July 2005:
wow so far im in chaper 2 but this is really interesting!! awesome i deas!! keep writing!! ill keep reading!! hehe!!
Author's Response: I'm a slow writer, just to warn you...hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.
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{reviewid: 610342, reviewer: 'susan'}
26th July 2005:
i just found this site and have read what you have written so far. it's great!! hurry with the rest!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. ^_^
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{reviewid: 594563, reviewer: 'Beatrice'}
14th July 2005:
awesome so far....i think you should do it like u said
Author's Response: Thanks for the input and review.
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{reviewid: 594561, reviewer: 'Beatrice'}
14th July 2005:
awesome so far....i think you should do it like u said
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
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{reviewid: 594552, reviewer: 'Beatrice'}
14th July 2005:
i think your stories are great! im really into this one...keep it up!
Author's Response: I've hit a huge writers block, but I'm almost done with the next chapter so hopefully it will be up soon
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{reviewid: 568231, reviewer: 'Connaisance_moi'}
28th June 2005:
Its been really long now, you have to update, please, pretty please, with a cherry on top * sigh*
Author's Response: Its been even longer...an update is in the works.
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{reviewid: 550195, reviewer: 'Connaisance_moi'}
17th June 2005:
It's been more than 10 days since my last review where you said you'd update within the week. Writer's block or life itself? Please try to update soon.
Author's Response: A little bit of both, I'm afraid. I just got another job, so I'm up to 40 hours a week of work, plus I'm taking 6 credits of classes this summer to get ahead for next semester. I'm about halfway through the chapter; I'll submit it as soon as I possibly can.
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{reviewid: 548588, reviewer: 'Holly'}
16th June 2005:
Read 1st two chpts so far and very good! Want to read more...!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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{reviewid: 535142, reviewer: '%5E%5E'}
8th June 2005:
nice chpt among the best i know ^^
Author's Response: Thank you very much; that is a great complement.
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{reviewid: 533562, reviewer: 'Connaisance'}
7th June 2005:
Yup it is more angsty than the usual, but that doesnt make it any less good. Av ery good chapter again empasising(don think thts the spelling) on what lily's desicion has done, lily has a bit of fun in the midle shopping, but then her best friend... sad. Update soon please
Author's Response: I'm working on a chapter right now; I should have it up within the week. I'm going to start making my chapters longer too, hopefully. Thanks for the review.
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{reviewid: 526456, reviewer: 'christine'}
2nd June 2005:
i happened to stumble upon this site and your story is one of the firsts ive come to read i really like it and i hope you continue to write
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you found this site; there are a bunch of amazing authors on here.
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{reviewid: 519640, reviewer: 'Connaisance'}
29th May 2005:
yup i think its a good idea to combine the chapters each chapter is too short on its own, but i dont hink it would become too long if they are combined. as usual ill comment on the main points in the chapter now. lily the perfect student not being able to master the basics, she must bbe devastated, but at least she has a freind to help her out. though it is wierd to lke hitory some people do like it and lily's not the average student. hope she gets better at studying
Author's Response: I always loved history, and I wanted to make it a subject that she liked because it was the common thread between muggle school and Hogwarts. Every school has history, and although the subject matter is quite different, it would be a comfort to find that common ground in such a crazy place.
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{reviewid: 519630, reviewer: 'Connaisance'}
29th May 2005:
quite a different way of looking at the separartion of the students in to different houses. Quite insightful of you
Author's Response: Thanks.
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{reviewid: 519631, reviewer: 'Connaisance'}
29th May 2005:
quite a different way of looking at the separartion of the students in to different houses. Quite insightful of you
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I tried to incorporate different things I've thought about with the books into this story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I tried to incorporate different things I've thought about with the books into this story.
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{reviewid: 519621, reviewer: 'Connaisance'}
29th May 2005:
go lily! i knew you had it in you. serves james right
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 519619, reviewer: 'Connaisance'}
29th May 2005:
Lily wants to go back to being a muggle now? at least now i know tht theres a reason for such a nice person going into slytherin
Author's Response: Thanks!
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{reviewid: 519617, reviewer: 'Connaisance'}
29th May 2005:
Slytherin? wierd though im sure u have a reason
Author's Response: Yep ^_^ I have my motives for everything.
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{reviewid: 519613, reviewer: 'Connaisance'}
29th May 2005:
lets see lilty's making new friends, good for her they're not predijuced against mudbloods. but how did lily know how to get on the platform? i mean harry is a wizard and he couldnt find out without help so how did she? no one is supposed to see the wizards dissapear throught the wall and not even harry managed to see that. please take this as constructive crticisism(wrong spelling i think). maybe u could get her to ask someone. james is being mean as usual, tht should stifle lily's good feelings towards him
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion; I'll keep that in mind. Thanks for the review!
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