I love Lupin. He has the saddest story in the world and this just accentuated him. Him being drunk, hungover, self-conscious about his body and about being British was all pretty fun to read. When I hit the part about Padfoot, tears just came to my eyes. It was so simple and so sweet and so incredibly sad. Generally I don't read slash or intended slash but there was something that drew me to your story and I am so very glad that I did, as sad as it made me, it was wonderfully written. Report Review
crazy, twisted and gross. but well written and u captured it all! Report Review
I always had a feeling those New Mexico boys were weird ducks if you catch my meaning. Report Review
interseting story, i'm not really big on slash, but i liked this one.. funny in a way.. lol Report Review
I read this story when we couldn't leave reviews (of course). I loved this story. It was powerful, expressive, provocative, and just...brillant. Wonderful story! ^___^ Report Review
Great story, though I still hate the songAuthor's Response: Thanks. Report Review
I just wanted to say say great job w/ the sect of the serpent! p.s remus isn't gay, tonkz likes him!
Author's Response: A girl liking a boy has nothing to do with the boy's sexual preference. But thanks for the nice comments.Author's Response: A girl liking a boy has nothing to do with the boy's sexual preference. But thanks for the nice comments. Report Review
Completly Stupid. You should delete it.Author's Response: But, if I deleted it, I wouldn't get any more stellar reviews like yours... Report Review
good story =D
Author's Response: thank you Report Review
yes well...they let random people vote and just tell them to pick ones with good grammar and whatnot and instead people pick the ones with a plot they like. stupid people who dont know what a good story is. i like to read some of them though. i just read one that made me cry...i think it was called the shattered mirror or something. Author's Response: Well that's good. I hope good stories really do win. Report Review
just wondering if you wrote a story for the writers duel lacy...Author's Response: I wrote a story for the very first writer's duel. It's called "The Truth" and it's linked on my livejournal if you want to read it. But I didn't really like the way the contest was run. They said the stories would be judged on things like grammar and spelling, but the story that won had a lot of very obvious errors... Anyway, I decided it wasn't worth it to enter any more after that. Report Review
Wow, you've lost me there... Does that mean Remus is Gay or just that guy... Is he a wizard? Ack, too confusing for my vacation befuddled mind...Author's Response: Wow... Maybe you need to re-read at another time. I didn't think it was *that* subtle... In the fic, yes, Remus is gay. He had a relationship with Sirius. And no, Jack is not a wizard, as evidenced by the line where he asks Remus why the pictures in his books move. Sorry to have befuddled you I guess... Report Review
This story is much more well written than your other story - I read in a review that this was more your own style than trying to emulate JKRs and, suffice it to say, your personal style looks a lot better on the page.Author's Response: I have to say I agree... Report Review
who are you?! i loved this story, and the sect of the serpent is going great. i had never thought about remus's love life, but i think homosexuality makes sense. and the dandelion boy was completely loveable, which is good, bc you know fan are going to be quite picky about precious remus's boyfriends. great job :)Author's Response: Haha! I'm just a regular girl writing fan fiction to avoid doing her regular job. =D I'm surprised that more people on this site don't do Remus/Sirius slash -- it's HUGE on other sites. =) Check out my livejournal if you like this -- I've got a TON of other R/S reccommendations. =) Report Review
I read this story simply because it had the word hangover in the description, along with Lupin. I love reading stories like this because there isn't much about Lupin in any of the stories, and you did a great job of making up a plot for him....although I still don't think that he is gay, you did an awesome job with the plot . Write more on your other story now! go!......now!
What are you doing still reading this? go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: =) Thanks. Actually, I'm compiling a list of stories that take place during Remus' "Lost Years." Unfortunately for you, I guess, most of the ones I've found so far have him either gay as a tree full of monkeys, or at least bi. =) Report Review
Did you know that canis lupus is the scientific name for a wolf? Anyway, I just read this story because you haven't posted chapter 30 yet on your other story. This is very well written but I dont think Remus is gay. At least that is my opinion. But the story is still very good. I enjoyed it. Granted, the other is much better, but you dont have enough reviews for this one so...Author's Response: I did know that, actually. Sorry that you didn't like this one as well as the other. It's more my own style rather than emulating JKR's. Thanks for reading. Report Review
Why Thank You, Jack!
Not you, we name the Monkey Jaaack!!!
---Barbosa and Jack
JACK!!Author's Response: Erm... I think you're in the wrong fandom, but OK! Report Review
That was... weird. Not a flame, not a complement, I'm just saying.... That was weird. O_OAuthor's Response: Well, er... Thanks, I guess! What was so weird about it? (Other than the fact that Remus was in America, gay, and playing drinking games with redneck cowboys?) =) Report Review
Wow, this was really good. Great writing and an orginal plot. I saw your other story on the "recomended story" section, but i didn't have the time to read your other story. Nice work.Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I know the epic is, well, epic... =) But thanks for taking the time to read this and leave me a review. I appreciate it! Report Review
Wow, I am extremely surprised you don't have more reviews for this. I really enjoyed reading this. Although it was set in America-you made it seem realistic and reasonable. Remus is perfect. Jack is great. Remus getting drunk-that was priceless. Your story is very unique but extremely well-written. You obviously know a lot about New Mexico. It was so sad though, when reading about how Remus thought Jack was Padfoot. But yeah...nice job :)Author's Response: Thank you! I do know quite a lot about New Mexico. I went to school in Santa Fe (and continue to harbor a secret belief that it is a wizard community) for four years. The cool thing is, The Owl actually exists, and I almost burned my tongue off on their green chile burgers. =) Glad you enjoyed the fic. Thanks for the great review. Report Review
Poor Remus! He seems to be having a really hard time of it, doesn't he? Your writing is really good, you get the reading into the story easily. The descriptions of the people and the places are very realistic and I could picture it all pretty well. The only thing is that the story is a little wierd, but there's far wierder ones on here I guess. Can't wait to read the rest!!!Author's Response: w00t! First review! Well Violet, I hate to break it to you, but this is a one shot. There is no rest to read. =( Ah well. And yes, I'll agree with you, it is a little weird, but that's part of its charm, wouldn't you say? Anywho, thanks for reading!! Report Review
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