I love this, were Snape and Brianna lovers? I hope so. I love soppy romance and cruel aftershocks! Please write more soon. I love it! Report Review
I loved it! Report Review
"... at ever full moon" At every?
"...Not necessary because he was interrupting" Not necessarily?
Aside from that, this chapter had more finer details then the last one and I think I'm slowly being drawn in. Update soon.
The beginning part was different, and it confused me a little bit but now that we're at the ''present'' I think I'm liking it. Report Review
good work as usual please hurry and finish Report Review
If you added a bit more of descriptive text it would make the story more interesting, show their inner feelings and frustrations, their hand gestures, the things they see, etc. Otherwise its coming along fine. Report Review
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