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Review #1, by ivoryangel prologue. memory lane

11th September 2005:
very interesting so far, whose pow was it at the beginning?

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Review #2, by Healer_25 prologue. memory lane

15th February 2005:
If you added a bit more of descriptive text it would make the story more interesting, show their inner feelings and frustrations, their hand gestures, the things they see, etc. Otherwise its coming along fine.

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