great story,loved it,but what the he'll did the sparkled say!!! Report Review
Your story's really good.
I only have one question though - if Chris isn't allowed to do magic to pack her trunk/suitcase how come she could to clear up the mess the ice-cream made? lol I'm just being picky - sorry!!!
I'm really enjoying it so off to read the next chapter!
Kay xxx Report Review
It was awesome! But it could have had more info. in itAuthor's Response: Thanks. I know, I know. I'll make sure when/if I write another fic. Report Review
this storie like totally roked. yea. rite a nuver 1 soon.
anniexxxAuthor's Response: Oh wow. Um, thanks for the compliment. This isn't my favorite story. The first always sucks, in my opinion. I'll TRY and write another one, just for you guys. I just can't imagine how you guys find my stories though, when I haven't updated in so long. Report Review
great story. the end could have been better though.Author's Response: Oh, oh, I know. I don't really like this one though. Thanks for reading though! Report Review
wait, the picture won't show! what did the sparkler say? Author's Response: Oopsies. I must've deleted it. I think it say, "I Love You." In a sparkler kind of way, you know? Report Review
Napoleon,very creative.lolAuthor's Response: Haha, thanks. I think I was thinking of the ice cream, but I couldn't figure out how to spell it. Report Review
amazing! george needs/needed a girlfriend. i liked how harry had no big role in this, and you maintained a inter-house relationship. is chris is a mary-sue? i really like her. can you try to write another story about her? maybe after she graduates or something?Author's Response: gosh, i'm so sorry. ummm dunno if chris is mary sue. i wish i could write another story about her, but this year is gonna be really busy since im just going to enter high school and all. i have graduation to deal with it, i just got off a 5day trip, and i have summer stuff to do. not to mention i still havent finished another story. Report Review
so chris had draco, neville, And george in love with her at the same time?
you have nice taste, and lots of talent cause you're pulling this off very nicely...Author's Response: uh...yes....i think. i cant remember since i wrote this SOOOO long ago. Report Review
apple jacks rule!Author's Response: i know :) Report Review
who makes such awesome banners? email me please, with the answer...... firstname.lastname@example.org
Author's Response: Gotcha. Report Review
i like your story but i think it wouldve been better if you had more detail and extended it out more and told more about her previous life and what she does at hogwarts and her family. this is like an overview and i think it would be better if you wrote like you were actually there with chris instead of reading her diary or whatever. Author's Response: cool, thanks for the heads up. yeah, i've taken to writing stories in third person point of view now...first person just doesn't work for me. Report Review
god her bro is mean!!!!!Author's Response: i agree...i'm surprised i still remember how mean he is. Report Review
i love the squids name! squiggy squibbertson carlton cheese the third!! lol! how on earth did you ever come up with that amazing name? were you high?Author's Response: high? perhaps. actually, my friend gave me that name. maybe she was high. Report Review
this is pretty cool. keep writing.Author's Response: cool, thanks. i am still writing, but not this story. it ended a whiel ago... Report Review
damn hat likes to tease everyone.Author's Response: yeah...i hate that. but hey, its the hat's job. Report Review
poor neville :( Author's Response: i agree...something bad always happen to him. Report Review
yay! i love fred and george! they are the awesomest characters in the whole books! (neville is runner up)Author's Response: yup yup, george and fred are AWESOME. and so's neville. Report Review
well its a litlle confusing but i still like it. the part im confused about is where she is. she talks like shes in france then chicago? huh? and what school was she at? where? what happened?Author's Response: yeah, so sorry about that. i noticed character change in dialogue...and im pretty mad at myself. but i think ive improved on it :) hurrah. uh...i think shes from france, but born in chicago or something. i have no clue [bad memory]. Report Review
omg! i LOVE apple jacks! lol! ill write more later. good story!Author's Response: haha. yeah...i dont much, i go for frosted flakes or chocolate cereal. Report Review
Oh Good God, could any more things happen. First Neville, now George. Geesh.Author's Response: I know! I wouldn't know who to choose, actually. Probably both, if I could. Haha, yeah right. ;) Report Review
AH! WHY IS DRACO LIKING HER NOW? UGH! How many men can like one woman at one time? Wow, this is an amazing story.Author's Response: Haha, I guess I pretty much implied that Draco liked Chris. But unfortunately, he doesn't. Report Review
Ooh. Neville likes Chris. HE GAVE HER HIS PLANT THINGY! AHH! Eheheh! BUT WHAT ABOUT GEORGE?! AHH! SO CONFUSING!Author's Response: yeah....so confusing. but you'll find out later. Report Review
Wow, Chris is really a clutz. She's just tripping and falling over everything.Author's Response: i know! sorta reminds me of me, lol. Report Review
Aw, poor George. He probably feels way dumb. He didn't even do anything, and Chris was all like "Ah!" Great chapter!Author's Response: yeah, i know what you mean. i feel bad for georgeus too. :( Report Review
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