BEAUTIFUL STORY!!! =)

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This Sucks!!This Sucks!!This Sucks!!This Sucks!!This Sucks!!This Sucks!!This Sucks!!This Sucks!!

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WOW! That was awesome. Sad, Happy and lovely. I loved it!

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oh my god...im crying. thats sooo beautiful! thats a really touching story! i hope you feel you have done well on this story because, believe me, you have!!! i have had fun reading this & i hope you have had fun writting it! thanks & well done for the story!

tashmash xx >=]3

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All I can say is 'wow'.This was a great story and I think that it had one of the best endings ever.Keep in mind that you are a great author and that could be a career choice for you.Write more and I will check to see what you have written.And just so you know I always review and give my very blunt opinions.I wish all the luck in the world to you.

From Your Friend,
Victoria DeLayne West

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Aww, that was a sweet llittle novella, I liked it a lot. Totaly a 10/10! ^.^

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I like this story very much! The ending is the best - about them seen at night. It is very original.

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Okay, well, obviously Draco has lots to hide, as is suggested by the title. I like the chapter lengths.. Shot, sweet, and to the point.

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Hmmm... lots of hints about what Draco's problem is... Very intriguing. I like the way you alternate between Draco and Hermione's perspectives... I believe the phrase, “Don’t ever let anyone see you cry. It makes you appear weak and worthless," must be Draco's personal motto in this story.

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beautiful is all I can say.

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WOW!!! very good story, but why does it have an "M" rating? the only thing was that i don't like to think of Harry as such a jerk...when he's mad at first, that's okay, but for them to never be friends??? ahhh scary...

Author's Response: just trying to keep mods happy... and some of it comes from the violence

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oh he naughty!

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ohh noo! lol i hope he doesn't hurt her!

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WOW! i love that part where you said, "little did she know it would never be recovered." that was REALLY cute. great chapter

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this might the the OCD talking, but i think you mean "enraged" and "you're" is "you are" and "your" is like, "Is this your pencil?" i'm really sorry lol i just had to get that off my chest.
it's a really good story and i love where you're going with it (i love to ship D/Hr) but maybe proof read? or have someone else proof read??

Author's Response: lol ocd or not its a lost cause promise

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fab

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this is really good. :)

Author's Response: thank you! read my other one if you like this one

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aw this fic is beautiful!!!

so sweet and has a real deep meaning!

i love it!!

oxox

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Aw that was just beautiful , although I would of liked to of read more about it .but it was perfect and simple
10

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i enjoyed your story until chapter 12. i found after this it lacked any confidence, you seemed to stammer on the important things and directed the audiences attention to unimportant facts.
your bringing together of hermione and draco was an interesting perspecitive but i believe you rushed there relationship, and it would have been better if you had drawn out the 'i love you's and brought them through more trauma. i thought you had given up writing the story by the last 2 chapters.
overall it was good, i look forward to reading another.


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amazing ending to your story! mine probably isnt that good... lol

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great chapter! can't wait to read more

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That was a good ending, I liked it...it did make me tear up though.
Awesome story!

Lisa x

Author's Response: i think you meant "didnt".. but its okay i didnt cry either lol

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good chapter

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hey, this chapter wasn't that bad

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