just as surprised as Hagrid, and far more nervous. - i think id be rather nervous too if someone as big as Hagrid walked up to me in a creepy manner.
Bloody Hell, Mark whispered to Hailey - nice to see Ron has rubbed off on his son.
you would do well in Ravenclaw, perhaps….It would make you smarter - i thought people were put into Ravenclaw because they were already smart, not so that they could become smart...
I mean, she’d never make it in Ravenclaw - you calling her dumb? thats not very nice.
If you knew Hailey the way we do, you would know better! - what is it with you people? does she really seem stupid to you? a little insane about the dreams...that would be understandable. but calling her stupid? come on.
Professor Remus Lupin, Defense Against the Dark arts, Deputy Headmaster, and head of Gryffindor house - so not only is the werewolf back to teaching, he is in high authority. i like. i also like how Deputy Headmaster and head of Gryffindor are like a package, since they got passed on together. Report Review
And, there was something else… - hmmm... that sounds oddly like: BUT WAIT, THERES MORE!! in more of a calmer, less shouting, and more creepy feelings sort of way.
And all I really know so far is what Ive read in my books. - of course, depending on what books he read about magic, he might just not know anything at all.
All this time, she had tried to figure out some kind of literal or figurative meaning behind the dreams - well, i think it is safe to say you have found literal meaning. unless, of course, this boy is really a figment of your imagination, in which case it wouldnt be. of course, you could just be having another dream. Report Review
read the entire story, all chapters! this was great! thanks alot, I am going to see what else you have written. please keep writing. Report Review
I read this story because my name happens to be Hailey then I also know a keiran, so I thought htat was funny great story! Report Review
OH, wow, that was great. The Luna/Harry relationship always interests me...lol really cool... Report Review
I like your idea of having harry and luna together. i think that this book will be interesting. after all, if hailey inherited things from luna and harry, that will be interesting Report Review
i like it:) though i always feel weird reviewing a story that has already been completed. oh well. good job! Report Review
I absolutely loved it! I can't wait to read the sequal! Report Review
Its a bit boring
but i think i will soon get engrossed in it!
i just read the 1st chapter! Report Review
your story is great!!!
btw I found a mistake-thought that you would like to know. You named the Potions teacher Snape in one sentence instead of Aubrey
'Hailey and Kieran decided to pack since they were going to be far too busy with Snape the next evening to have time to get their things together. ' Report Review
Awesome. Good job!! Report Review
Rating: 10/10. I would give it more if I could. Really! It rocks. I love it so much!! I'll review again after I finish reading it. I know you wrote a sequel, but could you please write more??? Like 5 more parts until she finishes Hogwarts??~everdreams Report Review
I enjoyed your story very much. This is the first time I have read Fanfic and this story was recommended to me. It is interesting that Fanfic gives the new author established background and characters that the reader is already familiar with so the new author can concentrate on plot, pace, new characters and such.In these areas you did excellent. I liked your characters - very personable, and the plot was great. I liked the use of the astronomical names as a clue as I have an interest in Astronomy myself. The pace of story was well metered and it kept me wanting to know what was going to happen next, this I beleive is difficult to do. You were able to spring surprises on me which is not easy to do, even for JKR, and that impressed me!
If I were to pick fault with the plot it would be that I did not quite think that the logic behind the malfoys idea to lure Hailey and be sure that Keiren would follow, considering they really didn't know that they were connected in thought and feeling, rang true.
This might be nit-picking. Anyway great work and I am going to start on your next story. I can't wait to see were you are going next ;-) Report Review
This was great. Report Review
hey!! i love this story! it's really good and i can tell that you put a lot of thought and work into it. i loved the plot and i loved hailey. amazing story! you shine, chica!
hey if ya want to, check out my brand new story! it's a lily/james fic. :)Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.I'm sorry I didn't answer you sooner. Unfortunately, I've had some computer issues and writers block, so I haven't been on here lately. I appreciate the feedback. I just posted ch 26 and it should be up soon. :) Report Review
this sto9ry is brill im guessing at this point that haily and kerin are like twins or summitAuthor's Response: Thanks for reivewing. There is a family connection between them, but its not what you might think. I hope you'll keep reading. :) Report Review
really great story i can't wait to read the next oneAuthor's Response: Thanks. I Just updated the latest one, and I'm hoping to finish it up soon. I appreciate the review and I hope you'll keep reading. Report Review
Did Percy get anything for hailey? If so what?
anywho, I like the story!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. No, Percy didn't give Hailey anything, because he didn't have anything to gain from it. He was trying to impress his family, particularly Mark so that he could use him. Report Review
its great Author's Response: Thanks so much. :) I'm going to put the next ch out really soon, and I hope you'll keep reading. Report Review
very nicely done - a couple of things stand out that you did especially well
a. even though set in the future, you add a bunch whiz bang new technology issues
b. Percy was well done - I have always thought he wasn't such a horrible git after allAuthor's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you like it. I was hoping in book 6 Percy might redeem himself, but I think he makes a good villain. :) I really appreciate the review. Report Review
This is a fantastic story!Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it and I hope you'll keep reading. :) Report Review
excellent!!! Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm working on the 2nd story now, and I hope you'll keep reading. Report Review
Interesting start. I too like the pairing of Harry and Luna!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you like it. I decided to put Harry and Luna together, because I love Luna, and because I didn't want to put Harry with Ginny because I didn't want Hailey to be related to the Weasleys for the purpose of this story. :) Report Review
that was great. i really like the idea of harry potter and luna lovegood getting married. i have nothing bad to say about it at all.Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing I appreciate it. i'm glad you like it and I hope you'll read the rest! :) Report Review
this is a great story!!! u r such a good writer!!! i cant wait for it to continue!!!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing; I really appreciate it. Hope you'll read my other story, which is the sequel. :) Report Review
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