{reviewid: 2280544, reviewer: 'SummerWind'}
7th January 2010:
Oh...that's sad...but very sweet, I think that you could probably make it a bit longe, lengthen the letter or add in extra flashbacks..
but it's still quite good
6/10
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{reviewid: 1903801, reviewer: 'Rica'}
23rd April 2008:
Really beautiful. The emotion is conveyed extremely well. I really felt like crying, and it reminds me of events in my own life. His feelings come across very real and deep.
Sirius is my favorite character. He was always loyal and strong, and unfortunately horrendously misunderstood. His suffering was drawn out the longest. (Except for maybe Remus who had to think all his friends abandoned him.)
These lines especially really hit home, "but he felt like he didn’t belong to them" and "He couldn’t shake off the feeling that he was all alone now". Beautiful job!
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{reviewid: 1759610, reviewer: 'Sal1705'}
20th December 2007:
Great Story, Write more slash with more funny random things in them!
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{reviewid: 1222093, reviewer: 'wired2damoon'}
9th December 2006:
wow...again pure heart-warming excellence!! Well done to you!! I really, really enjoyed this fic and your last one so basically I think the same as I wrote on your last fic so ya know well done and you probably read my other review so all things said this was excellent too!! Well done! 10! going in my faves as well!! ~wired2damoon~
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{reviewid: 909507, reviewer: 'the%20one'}
20th February 2006:
that was really nice its just to bad it was so short
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{reviewid: 839599, reviewer: 'EmilyBlack'}
3rd January 2006:
very good ! it made me cry !!! PADFOOT LIVES ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 721930, reviewer: 'Secret_Thinkers1_2'}
6th October 2005:
wait...sirius and remus...gay?
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{reviewid: 624950, reviewer: 'erinpotter'}
2nd August 2005:
i really cant believe you put sirius black and remus lupin together...gay? its really weird and im sorry to say...slightly perverted.
anyway, thats not why im posting. im posting because i think you have an excellent style of writing and i think you should write more. just no gay sirius? please!!
Author's Response: i really cant believe you put sirius black and remus lupin together...gay?
Hey, all the cool kids are doing it. :P Sorry if you don't like it.
Thanks for reviewing, you just made my day telling me I have an exellent writing style! :D
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{reviewid: 597929, reviewer: 'TiGZ%20Tar'}
17th July 2005:
Really good so keep at your RL/SB slashes they work for you ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks :D
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{reviewid: 548083, reviewer: 'kiersten_potter'}
16th June 2005:
eww gross sirius is not gay!!!
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{reviewid: 535250, reviewer: 'Lucid'}
8th June 2005:
This is a nice snippet of what Remus might have felt. I like the idea of the stolen kiss. I think it could have used more description but its a lovelty premise :D
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{reviewid: 438745, reviewer: 'Tanya'}
31st March 2005:
hmmmm...ok but i dont exactly like the idea of my 2 fave characters being gay lol :S anyway, carry on writing
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{reviewid: 415115, reviewer: '%3C%3EMidnightStar%3C%3E'}
15th March 2005:
It was. . . intresting. It was a little short. But good still. lol
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{reviewid: 273387, reviewer: 'Chelz%20Potter'}
24th November 2004:
I really like this story. Sad but good all in one.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :D And thank you for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 272131, reviewer: 'pheobepatil'}
22nd November 2004:
lat was sooo sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I was really nervous about posting this, I'm glad I'm getting positive reviews.
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{reviewid: 235783, reviewer: 'Deadly_sins_Snape'}
26th September 2004:
I agree, it was really cute! i loved that story!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
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{reviewid: 235772, reviewer: 'o0o_MoonyGirl_o0o'}
26th September 2004:
That was cute... and sad. Good work!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! :)
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