603 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Lily Olivers Epilogue

3rd June 2013:
Omg I loved this so much!

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Review #2, by Madi potter Potter. Potter. Potter. Snape. Malfoy

1st February 2012:
Me no likee no Harry/Ginny! Me no likee Harrys attitude! Me no likee Harrys bad habit! Yet me likee this fanfic!! Nice job. Normally me leave fanfic if me no likee ships. But me still be reading this fanfic.

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Review #3, by Maddie potter Explaining How & more!

1st February 2012:
This is a great fanfic! Just out of curiosty though, ate all the relationships cannon or just a few? Cause I love the Harry Ginny ship.

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Review #4, by ginnypotter242 Mischeif is a Virtue

24th March 2011:
Uhh...did you turn Sirius into a girl? I would laugh if you did...freat story thoughh...

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Review #5, by Mrs Sirius Black Mischeif is a Virtue

12th May 2010:
arghh.. i like this story a lot..

but your a pretty weird author.

a/n in the chapters.. sarcasm in the text like??

ohh and you should think more about improving Dumbledore's character.. your on the right track but aren't quiet there yet

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Review #6, by Mrs Sirius Black Who's Son?

12th May 2010:
Okay.. Here goes the review.

Great chapter, i love the plot development. The characters are well written and how jkr would probably do them herself.

Okay bad stuff now. I really don't like James being called Jim or Jimmy. The spell would have been good if you removed the bit that said 'last 20 minutes' and lastly do you really have to put a/n in the chapter, cause i get distracted :(

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Review #7, by Mrs Sirius Black Snivellius?!?

12th May 2010:
I liked the chapter :)

Was interesting..

Don't like Jimmy as James's nickname.. sorta annoying (sorry!)

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Review #8, by Mrs Sirius Black Introduction

12th May 2010:
not bad..

for an intro

:)

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Review #9, by sinwillys822 Potter. Potter. Potter. Snape. Malfoy

11th April 2010:
i like the way the story is going and can't wait to read more.

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Review #10, by Accio_potter27 The Aforementioned Havoc

24th October 2009:
I once again was LMAO!
what a disgusting drawing! The mental images...ew
*chills* xp
well... keep up the good work! :)

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Review #11, by Accio_potter27 Not drunk enough to have Forgotten all this by the Morning...

24th October 2009:
LMAO
harry is like CRAZY!
You are SO funny!

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Review #12, by Accio_potter27 REALLY meet your son

23rd October 2009:
Go Moony! :D lol
Great chapter!

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Review #13, by Accio_potter27 Explaining How & more!

23rd October 2009:
Snapey!
lol
Grreat story!

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Review #14, by hi You Can't Fake a Sparkle

19th September 2009:
ok im confused really really confused

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Review #15, by chuckwithluck Snivellius?!?

11th August 2009:
It is Hi-larious!!! I reckon it's not third year, since Remus isn't a teacher but maybe they just didn't see him? Hm

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Review #16, by chuckwithluck Introduction

11th August 2009:
Ok, it was a bit confusing but I get it! Awesome story so far. I really like it!

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Review #17, by loonyluna Mischeif is a Virtue

20th January 2009:
I love your story so far!!!
It's hilarious!! Just wondering, isn't Shannon a girls name??

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Review #18, by huffpuff94 Introduction

10th January 2009:
‘Hey, our homework’s gone!’ Sirius exclaimed happily.

xD Love him

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Review #19, by AceShooter Introduction

22nd May 2008:
Hey our homeworks gone! lol... Thats just hillarious, love it! hahaha!

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Review #20, by Rica Not drunk enough to have Forgotten all this by the Morning...

21st April 2008:
Harry is so freaking immature! He needs to get over being all emo and riddiculous. He is hurting his best friends and really damaging his parents, Sirius and Remus. Can he not swallow his petty resentment at being lied to in the face of this extraordinary opportunity to know the parents he lost? Acceptance and forgiveness at this chance to be with his loved ones are the emotions I would expect, as well as immense gratitude. Well, obviously, very few people behave maturely in times of emotional crisis, but people who have been through tragedy often seem to have a greater capacity for understanding and love. I expect better of Harry. The world does not revolve around him. THose who are close to him should make sure he knows this too. I would slap him for the comment he made to Sirius. Even if Harry is in extreme emotional turmoil, that doesn't give him the right to deeply and maliciously injure everyone else's feelings. With his volatile personality and selfish lack of concern for others, I would not be Harry's friend. Harry has been behaving as an egotistical, careless prat for most of this story. The story has been very good, and you do an excellet job of maintaining his characterization, so there's nothing negative about the writing itself. Just my dislike for the way Harry's character is.

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Review #21, by Rica Quidditch!

21st April 2008:
Ah! I can't believe the Slytherins would be so blatantly malicious! Harry and James could die! How could this be condoned?

On a side note, you're doing a wonderful job of keeping me on the edge of my seat. Also, James and Lily's feelings towards each other are well considered and believable. You are doing a wonderful job of developing them, and I love the parallel you have struck between their relationship and Ron and Hermione's relationship.

Bravo!

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Review #22, by caer24 Introduction

27th March 2008:
I liked the intro and the part where James attacks Sirius over tripping Lily.

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Review #23, by flamingolover Epilogue

23rd March 2008:
Cool, I just finishe dreding the whole story and I think it's really good-- some things bothered me though-- like the fact that you make Harry seem so arrogant and self-centered when he most clearly is not, or the fact that Sirius is so mean-- why must everyone insist on making Sirius so darn mean!!??-- anyway, apart from that, the plot was really cool, and it was certainly a fun read, and now I think I might check out "It's all in the Chase"

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Review #24, by huffpuff94 Mischeif is a Virtue

16th March 2008:
Why does Sirius have a girls name?

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Review #25, by huffpuff94 Who's Son?

16th March 2008:
I was trapped between Sirius armpit and James chest.


I wouldn't be complaining! *sigh*

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