{reviewid: 2664392, reviewer: 'Troll'}
24th February 2012:
You SUCK at writing.
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{reviewid: 2664388, reviewer: 'Troll'}
24th February 2012:
Failure. You are a REALLY bad writer.
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{reviewid: 1317801, reviewer: 'posie%20padfoot'}
23rd February 2007:
sort rad it in 20 min
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{reviewid: 475561, reviewer: 'malynnda_malfoy'}
24th April 2005:
still really good... but its way short... lol... its in my favorites now!
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{reviewid: 475558, reviewer: 'malynnda_malfoy'}
24th April 2005:
how did you get this to post? its rather short... lol... but its really good!! yay!! favorites!!
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{reviewid: 127378, reviewer: 'Matella'}
5th April 2004:
ooh my god! This is such a good start!!! BUT these two chapters could easily be made into one. You need to make your chapters a million times longer. And YOU NEED TO WRITE TONS MORE!! I think this is such a refreshing idea. They're already married; haven't come accross anything like this before! It's brilliant!! I really really really want to see where this is going, how their relationship will develop, what happened to them etc etc etc. So update soon!!!
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{reviewid: 38370, reviewer: '%7E%2AsHaDoW%2A%7E'}
22nd February 2003:
Can you read and review my story \"Broken\"? It would mean a lot and I\'m pretty desparate (as you can probably see). Thanx!
lotza love, shelby xoxo
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{reviewid: 37900, reviewer: 'jenniferj'}
14th February 2003:
i really like your story, it\'s really good. don\'t let the lack of reviews get you down, some people just don\'t know how. One thing, you many want to make your chapters a bit long, and if you have time could you check out my story love is a dangerous game
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{reviewid: 37634, reviewer: '%7E%2AsHaDoW%2A%7E'}
8th February 2003:
It\'s a really awesome story and every thing and i think it\'s gonna be a amazing story but why the hell is it in humor?
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{reviewid: 37454, reviewer: 'MaxPOWER%21'}
5th February 2003:
Wouldn\'t it be better suited in the romance section then?
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{reviewid: 37400, reviewer: 'MaxPOWER'}
4th February 2003:
To get to the point I see no indication in your prologue that points towards it being suitably allocated into the Humour section.
I suggest you either relocate it to Angst or add another chapter to enlighten your audience.
On the other hand I like the idea of Ginny\'s diary, and would love for you to remodel it as an angst fic.
Show her pain and suffering and the reasons why she thinks love is a facade.
Please consider!
Good try!
R/R my fanfics!
Just click on my name. =)
MaxPOWER!
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