great chapter Report Review
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good chapter Report Review
interesting Report Review
It really doesn't connect or make sense. Guys and girls are more awkward then that, a guy wouldn't just wake a girl in the middle of the night like that. And if James is that kind of person, I think you should have showed his character a bit more, gave him some depth before having him wake her up. And guys aren't able to get in girl's dorms. Remember? I t was in the fifthe book, I believe. Report Review
Was not impressed. The lanuage used was not appropriate or in character. Report Review
Hey i like it.Please keep writing I can\'t wait for the nect chapter. :) Report Review
Hey your other story wasn\'t that bad it was a little fast but you should try and work from it even if your brother wrote it.Well I like this one it\'s good.Please keep going. P.S. Please read my fic and review Love Can Hurt Thanx. Report Review
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