{reviewid: 1849450, reviewer: 'QUEEN'}
1st March 2008:
LOVE IT GREAT STORY!
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{reviewid: 1225964, reviewer: 'Jonathanbabe'}
12th December 2006:
Awsome so far.
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{reviewid: 1104716, reviewer: 'gurl_potter_fan'}
15th August 2006:
Great story. I never even though to think that Lily could be Jay's daughter. Great sotyr. I enjoyed to reading it.
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{reviewid: 961161, reviewer: 'PRINCESS%20AND%20QUEEN'}
16th April 2006:
I HAVE TO SAY EVERY CHARCTER EXCEPT DRACO AND WHATEVER I'M USING YOUR WORDS UNCLES GEORGE AND FRED AND JAY'S LITTLE TWIN BROTHERS
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{reviewid: 961102, reviewer: 'QUEEN'}
16th April 2006:
YOU KEEP MAKING SPELLING MISTAKES BUT STORY IS GOOD!!!
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{reviewid: 961041, reviewer: 'QUEEN'}
16th April 2006:
Nikki seems alot like Mrs. Potter (Ginny), Mr. Weasley (Ron)'s mother Mrs. Weasley saying "Couldn't you be more like Percy, Bill, or Charlie. the Chapter is good and so it he story!!!!!
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{reviewid: 946376, reviewer: 'kj'}
21st March 2006:
Im sorry i have not reviewed before, but this story is awesome so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 923912, reviewer: 'MistyinWaukesha'}
3rd March 2006:
Pretty good story. Liked it. Now off to the sequel!
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{reviewid: 799824, reviewer: 'Lilly%20Weasley'}
6th December 2005:
ooooooooooo freaky, but good and WOWmi like it!
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{reviewid: 614241, reviewer: 'i_heart_penguins'}
28th July 2005:
loved your story!
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{reviewid: 580817, reviewer: 'sweetpea2008'}
6th July 2005:
TOM!!!!!!!JAY!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 577835, reviewer: 'sweetpea2008'}
4th July 2005:
This was good....but kinda confussing....
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{reviewid: 539382, reviewer: 'miss_x_1991'}
11th June 2005:
um..kinda confusing but im sure it will make sense lata. but good job. very good detail.
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{reviewid: 517190, reviewer: 'buttonlady'}
27th May 2005:
I'm not a fan of stories that switch back and forth, but it's interesting enough for me to keep reading.
Good work
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{reviewid: 497298, reviewer: 'Kerry'}
11th May 2005:
Fabulous story! :) I really loved it, its one of the best I've read on HPFF in a while. Keep Writing!
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{reviewid: 496058, reviewer: 'Kerry'}
10th May 2005:
Tom is my favorite character, but I like all of his and Jay's freinds. Just a question, Isn't it July 5th 2018 not 2015? Or am I missing something?
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{reviewid: 495000, reviewer: 'Kerry'}
10th May 2005:
You say their wands are brothers but how is that possible when in chapter 6 that Tom's wand is Dragon heartstring and Jay's is unicorn hair???
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{reviewid: 494989, reviewer: 'Kerry'}
10th May 2005:
Dragon Munchers?!!?!!! Lmao I love it :) I love your story!!
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{reviewid: 491551, reviewer: 'indiangrl31053'}
7th May 2005:
I loved the story.
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{reviewid: 480417, reviewer: 'TRIA'}
28th April 2005:
HEY, YOUR STORY IS VERY INTERESTING.
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{reviewid: 470545, reviewer: 'Hiduras'}
21st April 2005:
I printed this story out and read it "cover to cover" you might say... It is a very original idea and a well completed plot line! thank you for a great story!
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{reviewid: 451267, reviewer: 'Dragon%20Girl'}
8th April 2005:
funny hehe the mauderettes.
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{reviewid: 451252, reviewer: 'Dragon%20Girl'}
8th April 2005:
confusing, slightly but still a very good beginning.
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{reviewid: 340036, reviewer: 'kryzt'}
18th January 2005:
[NOT LOGGED IN] Ive read all the Lost Prophecies companion pieces all well as this! They're fantastic!It took me a couple hours looking through all of it though! lol
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :) Thanks for reviewing!
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| Review #25, by likedylan_inthemovies | Epilogue |
8th January 2005:
Aaah it's about lily...i read the summary of it and got incredibly confused! This was obviously before i read Lost Prophecies. I'm going to go read the other one-shots and alternate ending. I know that my reviews for this weren't exactly full of constructive criticisms or helpful points, more like a little commentry on what i'm doing!
Author's Response: Don't worry. I can live without constructive criticism... Even though I know I need it. :) Makes me feel good about myself even though I know that is bad for me cos my head will start to swell up. ;)
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