please update soon!!!!!! this cool! Report Review
its a good story, it can be confusing at times to understand who is talking, also use lines in between paragraphs as having it just in a block made my eyes hurt, but i liked your story so please post again. Amber Grant Ps- if you have time plz check out my fic Harry potter and the ghosts from the past Report Review
Good work! I only have one correction-split up you paragraphs, but that's all! Report Review
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