coool oana, vezi ce scrie in review-ul de mai jos, ai grija cu greselile! acuma am terminat al 8lea capitol si il public. ce zici de povestirea mea? Report Review
really good! write more! Report Review
Hi u reviewed my story so i'll review yours! I liked it. The plot is good, i can see how its similaur to mine. Your character sounds very intresting. I think you need to describe her a bit more so the readers can picture her better. Some times it got me a bit confused like why did Harry go to the ministry in chapter 2 i didnt get it? its a bit fast, slow it down a little and put more detail in so readers know whats happening. Also i probaly have loads of spelling mistakes in mine too so dont think im being mean, but i saw a couple in yours so you might wanna check it over. well done keep up the good work. Report Review
go on please, bitch!
kizzes si..sa mai treci si tu pe la povestirea mea, ca acuma o sa public urm. capitol, deja il scriu pe nr. 8...dar mai am ceva chestii de polizat asa ca..mai vorbim
teo Report Review
where's the f***ing next chapter?
loool Report Review
the story is really cool, but it's just at the beginning, i can fell that the other chapters will be a lot more interesting than the first one. Hey, readers, you can read it! Nightdream is now writing the second chapter of the story! Well done, Oana! (nightdream...) Report Review
Hey it is cool. Report Review
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