7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by didosweety An outstanding confession

31st August 2004:
coool oana, vezi ce scrie in review-ul de mai jos, ai grija cu greselile! acuma am terminat al 8lea capitol si il public. ce zici de povestirea mea?

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Review #2, by lorien0590 An outstanding confession

30th August 2004:
really good! write more!

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Review #3, by Starlight_Veela The hole truth

30th August 2004:
Hi u reviewed my story so i'll review yours! I liked it. The plot is good, i can see how its similaur to mine. Your character sounds very intresting. I think you need to describe her a bit more so the readers can picture her better. Some times it got me a bit confused like why did Harry go to the ministry in chapter 2 i didnt get it? its a bit fast, slow it down a little and put more detail in so readers know whats happening. Also i probaly have loads of spelling mistakes in mine too so dont think im being mean, but i saw a couple in yours so you might wanna check it over. well done keep up the good work.

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Review #4, by didosweety The hole truth

30th August 2004:
great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go on please, bitch! kizzes si..sa mai treci si tu pe la povestirea mea, ca acuma o sa public urm. capitol, deja il scriu pe nr. 8...dar mai am ceva chestii de polizat asa ca..mai vorbim teo

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Review #5, by didosweety An outstanding confession

27th August 2004:
lalalalalalala where's the f***ing next chapter? loool

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Review #6, by didosweety An outstanding confession

22nd August 2004:
the story is really cool, but it's just at the beginning, i can fell that the other chapters will be a lot more interesting than the first one. Hey, readers, you can read it! Nightdream is now writing the second chapter of the story! Well done, Oana! (nightdream...)

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Review #7, by nightdream An outstanding confession

21st August 2004:
Hey it is cool.

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