It sounds a little to poteic for Ron but still good. Even though i can hardly tell how is talking. Report Review
that was very very very well written. The point of view is a bit confusing but the none the less excelent! Brilliant job!Author's Response: Thank you! 2nd person point of view is tricky. Report Review
Oh that was great!!! It was like perfect!!! I loved it!! You have a great mind!!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm glad that people are still reading my fanfiction. Report Review
simply spiffing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
awwwww, thats so sweet!!!! i dont think ron is too feminine-seemingAuthor's Response: Thank you so much, that made me feel better about the fanfic. Report Review
i am too lazy to log in right now. the begining of the story was kinda confusing but the end made me kinda laugh but it good. Report Review
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