I loved it. u could have shown who did this aweful thing to laura and remus. Report Review
i love this story. its not a load of nonsense u know? and i dont really get it. why. why did peter do it? that is sorta far fetched. i guess. even though the whole time i was thinking of him. as being it. but why did laura go abroad? and is this the end of their relaitionship like peter says?
i hate that little twerp. Report Review
Wow, I never guessed it'd be Peter.
What a rat!
Funny story =] Report Review
I knew it! I knew it! It is Peter who sent those damned letters!
I loved to read this; it is a great plot and I found it easy to read.
I really like your story!
Elvengirl Report Review
love it!!! Report Review
Loved it!LOL AKA lagh out loud! Report Review
wow...Peter Petigrew...who would have guessed?well it wasnt that unexpected considering he's always been the bad guy. You know i actually dont think that Peter is bad at all in the real books..he just a really stupid coward. Anyway your story was really good! hope you write lots more soon! Report Review
Bloody brilliant! I must say, I'm taking a few pointers on how to write Sirius' personality from you, if you don't mind. haha, I love it! Report Review
i love it i did think it was Peter at first i thought it was either peter or snape n it ws peter heehee i like it very cool Report Review
Poor Remus, i can't imagine why he doesn't get as much attention as James and Sirius. It's hardly fair, since he's so sexy :). But I am glad he met Laura. Great chapter, and great description. I have a suggestion though-you used Remus' name a lot of the time, yet half the time we knew who was thinking/speaking. It's unnecessary to keep repeating his name over and over. Report Review
Loved it! Report Review
Loved the creativity of the finger-print kit. I was afraid it wouldn't be magical. Great story. Report Review
Yes, my dear, I like it too....very intriguing so far, and well written. Report Review
Lovely beginning, but how could he have not noticed her before....surely the school and classes aren't that large. I do like your writing style...you have a great flair... Report Review
omg i loved your story! *cries* i can't believe it's over! This is definitly going on my favourites! Report Review
aww! That is so sweet! I love it! Report Review
Oh NO! Report Review
lol, nice a/n. i'm in love with your story *hugs remus* don't worry! we love you remus! Report Review
i love It! it's really original! Not enough chapters *sob* i never want it to end! Report Review
i love it! it's so cute! Report Review
i knew it!!!! i thought it was him, but when he started saying like 'off to write another letter' i began to think it wasn't him, but now i know i was right from the very beginning, Mouse Boy really is a rat, tsk tsk tsk, we will have to do something about that, i know!!!! *walks over to Tom(voldie) casually* Me:So....Tom:What do you wantMe:I know about your spongebob boxer shortsTom:Liar, like who would know about my spongebob boxer shortsMe:ahhh, so you admit it, well, i just saw Mouse Boy run out of your pretty princess bedroom with them and show every reader in the districtTom:How dare he, and i DONOT have a pretty princess bedroom.....it is prepy princessMe:Right.....well, off to kill him now i presume?Tom:not only that, i am going to take my perfect hand back...muahahahaWell, i hope you liked my little play there, BRILIANT story=) Report Review
awwww, bookworm and.....what did i call her again?! oh well, all thanks to
Strange Man! lol, you go Strange Man, he is definatly my favoriteist charcter in this story, even though favoritist isn't a word.lol, BRILIANT! Report Review
BRILIANT!!! if i was werewolf, i would go on my first day of hogwarts and shout 'I'm a WERWOLF!!! fear me!!!!!' lol, and i would cherish the gift proudly, except when it was a full moon, it must reall hurt don't ya think, oh well, i really liked this chapter, my favorite so far!=) Report Review
BRILIANT!!! SternFace isn't going to like that one bit, nope, nope, nope, bookworm and grasseyes are jut going to have to hurr and get thier proof from Strange Man. lol Report Review
i like that strange man, i think i will call him Srange Man, ya, i like it!lol, poor Laura, i have a friend named Laure, she is rather strange, an Anime/Manga freak. lol, and always sitting alone, but she does have friends, so thats an upside, anyway, BRILIANT story, hope remus gets over all of this soon and comes to me!!! i can be Laura, if i sit in a corner, will you come see me,m and i really do hate Sirius and James, mostly James, the arrogent prat, but thats not the point, BRILIANT!!! lol Report Review
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