James is a bit of a pervert, isn't he? plz upd8 soon!Author's Response: Hi! I'm just letting you know that I'm actually working on the story now! Hopefully I will update soon :) Report Review
that little pervert! i like ur story it's really cute : ) Report Review
pwwwwwwwwwease update. i no u havent, but i love ur story SOOOO much. JUST PWEASSEE?! =) LUV YA Report Review
Hmm sounds good so far, I cant wait for more, I love the way they met and the whole diagon alley thing and well all of it I guess! Post more soon!Author's Response: Omg guys!! I completely forgot about this :O. When my computer crashed I lost the story so far :'(. I had loads more written!! I'm going to try and write some more sooon I promise :) Report Review
ahhh keep going :-D Report Review
great story please write more, like how lily ends up hating potterAuthor's Response: Keep reading and you will soon find out. ^_^ Report Review
cool story, keep writingAuthor's Response: Thank you! ^_^, oh and don't worry, I will! :D Report Review
Great start! Exactly the reaction i'd expect from a muggle born. There isn't really much that I can think of to say! Your story has a lot of promise, so keep going! Take Care!Author's Response: Thank you very much, I tried my hardest to get Lily to not understand anything and seems I did okay. Thanks! Report Review
hey, great start to your story, hopefully the rest of your story will be as good and well-written as this chap. [well if you can actually make it better, lucky us]!! hopefully you'll post chap.2 soon. love always, Emerald EyesAuthor's Response: Thank you very much, I've actually just submitted the next chap, it's on its way! Report Review
So sorry about that!!! it was slow so I just kept clicking and then it went 4 times!Author's Response: Lol! No problem, thanks so much for reviewing and I'm glad you like the beginning! ^_^ Report Review
Hey! I'm the 1st reviewer! Just for that, I'm giving your story 10. x Report Review
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