So, I am left with a question which may never be awnsered. Why is this catagorized as a "crossover". The crossover genre does not mean "characters who died and crossed over to the after life" and it doesn't mean "characters who cross over to the goth life style".

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"this isn't my story i am just saying what would make harry potter more interesting"

Wait, are you trying to tell me that Harry Potter would be more interesting with the characters acting strange, in this case Ginny? Well, maybe... but this isn't meant to be a parody fanfic, is it? There is no explanation as to why Ginny suddenly goes goth nor does it mesh with her personality as laid out in the book.

To be fair, I'll check out the next chapter.

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ya this story is retarded


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hey, i like you story but you need to update :(

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shaa bra, i mean great story dude, it's like totally rad. can't wait for..

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I think you should write the next chapter because I've benn waiting forever for the next chapter.

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It is pretty good, but not all goths have bad attitudes. I'm a goth and I don't.

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Sorry to be critical, but I think maybe you should consider using the spellchecker on your computer, as the mis-spelled words make it extremely hard to read the story. The story really doesn't make sense, but that could be that it is only the first chapter and it is just setting up the story. I will be checking back to see the next chapters! I think it has potential!

Author's Response: Thanks for the potanal part. FYI, you don't save complements till the end, it is a hypcaritacil thing to do.

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AWESOME! up-date soon plz!

Author's Response: I will! Thanks for the sapport. my other readers are more critical. -Houlestar

Author's Response: I will! Thanks for the sapport. my other readers are more critical. -Houlestar

Author's Response: I will! Thanks for the sapport. my other readers are more critical. -Houlestar

Author's Response: I will! Thanks for the sapport. my other readers are more critical. -Houlestar

Author's Response: sorry for the repetive thing. I had truoble with the compter. and Sorry on differnet site Houlestar* moon is my pen name. Sorry.

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