so much better than your other story


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WHAT THIS CHAPTER IS A REPEAT OF THE LAST CHAPTER

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Well, this chapter was very short...I thought that Ginny seemed a little bit too juvenile for her age, ya know? I also think that she'd be deeply depressed over that thing with Dean, and not get over it in a matter of minutes. Anyway, keep writing!

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I don't think it's a dumb chapter...it was just really short. What I meant when I said Mrs. Weasley wouldn't let them join the Order yet is because when Fred and George were 17, they weren't allowed to join. Anyways, good job!

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I liked that begining... What do you mean Mrs Weasley won't let them join the order yet? Aren't wizard considered 'adults' when they're 17? (allowed to do magic outside of chool and all). As far as we know, they might join the order in seventh year (eventually, they'll have to in JKR seventh book or we won't know what's been going on in Order meetings). Well anyways I should stop rambling. Keep on writing, and could you please give one of my fanfics a review? thanks lol

Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you will keep reading, and I will read your stories too.

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This is an EXCELLENT improvement in your formatting etc. It's much better! The only thing I've got negative to say about it is that Mrs. Weasley wouldn't let them join the Order yet...anywyas, I especially liked the opening. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you. But, That was when they were 15, remeber? In this story, they are 17.

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