It was very well written try adding very strong details like well the scarlet dyed sky or you know it will make sound more proffesional. You write exceedingly well! LOL Report Review
*kicks* BWHAHAHAHA It was good Report Review
OH i forgot are you gonna help me with my story? Should i bring to school? call me. Report Review
Hello ego! i am gonna make you explode!!!!!! muhuahuahua!!!!!!!
its awesome jasmine! So she was abused at this orphanage? This is in the time of the maruaders if remus is a kid, right? So is she gonna be friends with them? Try for longer chapters and name its just more fun! See you at school at Ms. Kara's classAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! Well, actually, she wasn't abused at an orphanage. If you read the excerpt, she ran away from it because of the people she was going to live with as parents. I guess she hated them at first sight. P.S. Yes, it is the Marauder era. Report Review
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