Reading Reviews for The Flame of His Existence
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by The Poisonous Redhead! Prologue: The Beginning

9th January 2005:
great tiff!! keep on writing cuz i wanna read more!!

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Review #2, by pendra Prologue: The Beginning

29th December 2004:
I think this story so far is so great!

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Review #3, by veritaserum2009 Prologue: The Beginning

10th August 2004:
Wow. I don't know what else to say. This story is absolutely amazing. There are a few spelling and grammar problems, but that's easily fixable. This story is very wonderfully written. Everything flows. Maybe it was just me, but I didn't really realize that it was Voldemort's father until the last line of chapter one. Maybe you should clear that up, but then again it might ruin the flow of the story. Keep up the good work, and never let what anyone says stop you from writing! Take Care!

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Review #4, by pointedfeet Prologue: The Beginning

6th August 2004:
Ooh, it's great! If you want to save yourself some trouble with the research, you can find everything here: http://www.hp-lexicon.org/index-2.html. Hope it helps! :) I really like this story. You are one of the few authors around here who can write without atrocious grammar mistakes and constantly repeated words. And, a plus: I had thought shortly about writing about our dear Tom, but gave up after writing only a few short paragraphs. Kudos to you for boldly going where few authors have gone before!

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