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Review #1, by Anonymous The Mystery That Is You

23rd April 2008:
Pretty good, innocent, fluffy stuff, if a little out of character, but I mostly reviewed because I have a question, What did you intend with this statement? "...running a finger over the black kohl that lined my eyes..." By kohl, I'm not sure what you were referring to. Kohl is a black sort of makeup substance used by women and occasionally men in the Middle East as an eyeliner/eyeshadow and mascara. I don't think that's quite what was intended...

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Review #2, by hillo09 The Mystery That Is You

15th January 2007:
ah it's so cute

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Review #3, by Sook Yan The Mystery That Is You

31st December 2005:
A very touching story!!

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Review #4, by Hermione Potter The Mystery That Is You

16th August 2004:
It was sooooooo cute to see that.

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Review #5, by HarRyPottErLOVER The Mystery That Is You

6th August 2004:
Hoping this story gets hotter slash stories are my favorite fanfics. Update soon.

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Review #6, by Danni The Mystery That Is You

6th August 2004:
Awwwwwwwwwww! How cute! it was a little fast, but soooooooo sweet! I loved it! alot! ( '',)

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