2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by erised713 The First Night Back

8th February 2007:
What was really the point of this chappie other than talking about their families and summers? It seemed like not much happened.

 Report Review

Review #2, by veritaserum2009 The First Night Back

10th August 2004:
You said you wanna know really inportant Ravenclaw information, right? Here goes; Hannah Abbot is NOT in Ravenclaw! She's a Hufflepuff! Sorry! This story has promise to go somewhere interesting, but as of right now it is really hard to understand. You are trying to explain waaay too many things at once. Take things a little slower. There are so many things happening right now that the reader can't really grasp it. (unless of course you just happen to be in Ravenclaw!) I think that you may be trying to introduce too many characters at once too. You can't really remember who's who. I might also suggest getting a beta reader. Keep up the good work, and remember to never let what anyone says stop you from writing! Take Care!

Author's Response: Yeah, now thats the kind of info I need! Will edit the Hannah flint very soon...maybe now...nah.

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login