Hello again! This was an interesting introductory chapter, we've met all (or at least most) of the characters, and you've described their personalities nicely. You've also set out the plot and the whole thing was just really interesting!

Author's Response: Thank you. This story has been abandoned and I'm slightly embarrassed by my older fics, but I'm glad you liked it anyway.

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Wow! I absolutely LOVED your story. It was simply amazing. You wrote in the same way I would have. The deep feelings you describe are exactly right. I can't wait to read more.

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Hello! Great first chapter! That's the frist fan fiction I read where Lily and Remus are so close, that's nice! Ciao!

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Great, awesome, completely right at an emotional moment. You grasped on to the concept that certain things effect people in different ways. You have also seemed to realize that Lily and James will take a lot of time. Not just James changing or them finally stop criticizing each other, but that it will take time, and patience. I enjoy this story very much, and it was peaceful yet dramatic not like the very fake situations that some people write.

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Yeah! I like this story. I was just browsing, and what luck I have in finding such a magnificent story!Update, please!

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o that's so nice

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i love the story, its great. the characters are 3d, which isnt very often seen but i think that maybe you should put a bit more of passion and tension between lily & james, to really hook the readers u

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Loverly. Yummy, more please! I love how you are giving Lily and James time to like eachother. It's not just "I hate you. Nevermind, i liked you all along..... lets go and have hot sex behind that bush." Thanks for that.

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i liked your fic so far alot. definately keep up with it. and update soon please :)

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i couldn't stop reading this story! please update soon!

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I really, really like this story! I love that Lily hangs around with the Marauders all the time so when they are discussing their ''love life'' she just happens to be there. I wonder if we'll see a What I Like About James List? I'd like that. Anyway, keep up the good writing!

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i love your story plese post again soon

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You're an amazing writter you know that!? That's the best Lily?marauders story I've ever read!You shud spice it up a little near the end maybe with a kiss between lily and james..oh well. You shud totally continue the story..lookin forward to it.

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This is a REALLY good story! Update soon!

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Even though it was a shorter chapter, and you claimed that you forced youself to write it, I wouldn't have known, save that announcement you made at the beginning of the chapter. It was still a great chapter, and Lily and James' relationship is slowly developing, but not too quickly. Great job. By the way, this story is going into my favorites =D

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I was laughing all throughout the chapter. You certainly put in some witty remarks. But there wasn't only comedy in the chapter-there was also romance. I loved the list James made about Lily. Don't tell anyone, but it almost made me cry. I am a hopeless romantic. Great job. Oh, I almost forgot, excellent descriptions once again. =)

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Yes, you didn't make Lily hate Peter for no reason at all, and you didn't make him that stupid. Thanks. And the dream was very interesting. Once again, amazing descriptions. I'm glad you didn't make James always try to get along with Lily, that's boring. And about Dumbledore seeing what he saw in James-that was the sweetet part of the chapter. Great job.

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I love long chapters. Now that I've cleared that up, I would love to congratulate you on having excellent descriptions, and keeping everyone in character. I wish I read this story sooner, it's better than most Lily/James fanfics. Great job.

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Intriguing

Author's Response: Do reviewers really think that reviews like that are actually wanted by writers? If you're going to read and review a story, make sure that your review is actually worth posting. I'd rather get half the reviews that I have if they were longer, filled with constructive criticism, and reflections from the reader. Just saying "intriguing" does absolutely crap for me as a writer when I'm trying to improve. It just would've been better if you hadn't reviewed at all.

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I really love the way you allow the reader to get inside the characters head. The dislogue between James and Lily is great and I love how it progresses, as always I am loving the way you write ~Lucid

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This chapter was really good, it fit in fine with the others even though you wrote it much later. It's nice that you've finally gotten Lily and James together, if only as friends. The way that you've made them find an understanding was really nicely done. Once again, your dialogue and interactions between characters were wonderfully done. I've really enjoyed reading this story, and I hope that you do continue it eventually - it's surely the best Lily and James story on the site. ;-)

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That was so incredibly funny! I couldn't help but giggle throughout the entire chapter at the Marauders' antics. You've written them all so well in this story. The last scene had to be the best, right from the time when James and Sirius cannot remember the one girl's name, then the list that James made, to the end when they throw the cushions at James. It was all so wonderful.

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Wow, this was even better than the first chapter. The plot is so deep and intruging, while the characters are so interesting to read about. The dream sequence was wonderfully written, very poetic, and the ending was satisfying and suspenceful at the same time. Gosh, there's nothing bad to say about this story, everything seems to fit together amazingly well. I'm pretty excited to continue reading until the end. ;-)

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This was a really really good story, Missy. I'm angry with myself for not reading it sooner. The way you've written the characters and interracted them with one another is amazing. You've also nicely mixed many different genres in this, instead of making it a straight romance between Lily and James. I simply adore your take on Lily, she seems like such a normal, everyday girl and very easy to relate to. Hopefully, I'll be able to read the rest of this story today, it looks like it should be a pleasure to read.

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ohhh, I LOVE THIS STORY! You had better update SOON!

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