AHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Whats with the cliffhanger!! Oh, by the way Loved the chapter. Report Review
WOOoowww sooo suspensefull!!! ohhhh! coool cool update soon and keep up the good work! Report Review
I want to know more. What happens to Ruby? Why does Voldemort wants Ruby? Please update soon! I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Report Review
Wow, great story! I like how Ruby named Ron "Carrot." Report Review
that was really good!!!! ahhh!!! I especially liked Ron's new nickname! carrot... haha, if I were his friend I would totally be calling him that. I'm very interested to see where you're going with this. I enjoyed your "mini cliffhanger". My only suggestion would be to check your spelling. I noticed a few misspelled words. By the way-where was Hermione?? and why on earth does Ruby want to be in Slytherin?? Overall your story is great! keep up the wonderful work! Report Review
I really have to hand it to you. NO punctuation mistakes, NO spelling mistakes, NO grammatical errors and all the canon characters are (somewhat) in character.
The only thing wrong is the godawful Mary Sue, but in this archive, there's been much, much worse. *shudders* The quality of most of the stuff here is... err..
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