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Reading Reviews for The race for a girls love
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by xlovex the surprise at the burrow

26th February 2007:
this seems really good

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Review #2, by Jess the surprise at the burrow

19th September 2004:
Keep Going!

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Review #3, by twinkerbell8402 the surprise at the burrow

4th August 2004:
hey it's pretty good so far, I would like to see Hermione go after Ron and Harry, but she get's confused....Not after those two new guys. LOL! Anyways, keep up the punctuations, and paragraphing u know....but in the end, I think the plot is good. :)

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Review #4, by CavaCalle the surprise at the burrow

31st July 2004:
Ya definitely separate the paragraphs (examples: my stories) and.... You really need a good beta! The plot has potential but don't overdo it.

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