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See! Frank thinks its nice! Write more on it cuz u love me! *doesnt expect much and ponders on who frank is* Like my name? lmaoAuthor's Response: Hey Amy! Hahahah! You know how lazy I am. I don't wanna write more. So far I'm winning our little bet! Get started on your 2 chapterrrrrrs!!!! Frank is a friend from school. Love the name! Call me! Report Review
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That's awesome! I can't wait to read more. The plot is very orignal and very exciting. I really like the their witty remarks. Good job.
I have one suggestion. Usually when characters talk, they are seperated into a new paragraph when it switches to a new character speaking.
"yada yada yada" said Jerry deviously, as he ploted.
"That's nice" responded Jim)Author's Response: Hey Frank! Thanks! I don't really think it's that good, but thank you! Report Review
I appreciated your next chapter. lol I will be your special regular reviewer. ^_^ Report Review
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*GASP* U GOT ANOTHER CHAPTER UP!..as if I'm not actually talking to u right now telling u all of this... the next one must come out now...especially since I know who the 3 people are...*looks innocent* Report Review
That was funny. What else is new? hehe Report Review
Wow, I sure wouldn't want to smell Sirius right now. I feel really bad for him. Having to smell like that then again it sounds like he's used to smelling but still I feel bad. This was a great chapter. You might want to space it out more. So it's easier to read. I wonder who the girls are. Lily's in it, isn't she? Well that's just my guess. Sorry I rabble to much! Whenever I get a chance to review I go on and on. Anyway I give it a 8. Good job! Update soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!!! *Takes her 8 and runs to the mountains* I don't think I'll put Lily in the prank group because well...she's against that with Snape anyhow. I think maybe all new characters. Oh I don't know! Tune in next time! I'll figure something out! Report Review
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