Hi! I found your story with the Random Story button (love that thing), and I thought I'd stop by with a review :)
I thought this was a cute chapter, and the list made me smile. The Marauders seem just like I would imagine them to be...they're funny and clearly like to have a good time (especially at Moony's expense :P). Have you thought about adding more chapters to this? I think it would be fun to read a story that started this way, and the "crash course" that Sirius mentioned would make for hilarious reading :)
I did see a few spelling mistakes in the chapter (for instance, "innat" should be "innate"), but those can easily be fixed. There are tons of great beta readers on the forums that could clear up little issues like that :)
This is great for a laugh, and I'm glad I found it! And like I said, I think it could be the start to a really cute story if you wanted to expand it. Keep it up!
--Maggie (House Cup 2012) Report Review
very funny!!! lol Report Review
oh cute! I like it! Report Review
theres no 'e' in moony. just thought u should kno Report Review
Funny. can't wait to read about the first 'test'! Report Review
Hi, this is a cool story but I have to tell you...Moony has no "e" in it. Sorry If I seem a little rude but Remus is my favorite character and seeing his name spelt wrong makes me go crazy >.< lol but I still like the story line!Author's Response: Ooh, thanks for catching that. I never would have. :) Report Review
Or, if you're like Sirius and haven't got one, you should read a lot of books and get ideas from there.
avg. witch, taming lionesses...
Nice. Very nice. KEEP POSTING! Report Review
Very cute! Are you going to write more? I want to read about the crash course! The way you wrote the three is great; just how I imagined they would be during their Hogwarts days. Write more! :) Report Review
hm...haven't sen anything much like this before. i can't wait to see what happens. Report Review
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